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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays many countries host big international sporting events to improve its economic growth. A number of people favour the concept of hosting international sporting event while others believe its merely waste of time and money. These massive events can provide country with much-needed economic boost as well as it can expose the public relations disaster. This essay will look at both points using some examples. On one hand, these global events attracts numerous visitors and tourists who attend these events to boost morale of their team. This increase in tourists have a tremendous impact on local economy and local people observe a dramatic rise in sales of their goods and services. For instance, in a recent survey conducted in England after 2019 cricket world cup shows that local businesses like restaurants and hotels had up to 80 percent increase in business during the period. Such international events often gain media attention from all over the globe and many people around the world would learn about the country which have a great benefit in terms of tourism and trade for the organizing country. Finally, hosting such events often enhances diplomatic relations among nations which is great in maintaining world peace. On the other hand, such international events require world class facilities and infrastructure and often requires huge amount of economic investments and if not utilized effectively afterwards could dwarf the benefits. For instance the stadium build for commonwealth games 2002 in Manchester was later sold to local football club Manchester city. Attracting international media attention cannot guarantee a positive promotion as media will definitely report controversial news as well. During Beijing Olympics 2008, huge protests were observed in China over the genocide in Tibet and even this protests took a violent turn and around 22 people were killed and hundreds were injured. Such events bring a lot of negative attention from all over the globe. To conclude, a host city or nation has a lot to gain from these events but only if they are economically administered correctly and the country has no controversial issues for the media to pull out of the closet.
Nowadays
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host
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international
sporting
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to
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improve
its economic growth. A number of
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favour
the concept of hosting
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international
sporting
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event
while others believe its
merely
waste of time and money. These massive
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events
can provide
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country
with much-needed economic boost
as well
as it can expose the public relations disaster. This essay will look at both points using
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some
examples.

On one hand, these global
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events
attracts numerous visitors and tourists who attend these
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events
to boost morale of their team. This increase in tourists have a tremendous impact on
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local
economy and
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local
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people
observe a dramatic rise in sales of their
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goods
and services.
For instance
, in a recent survey conducted in England after 2019 cricket
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world
cup
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shows
that
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local
businesses like restaurants and hotels had up to 80 percent increase in business during the period. Such
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international
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events
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often
gain
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media
attention from all over the globe and
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many
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people
around the
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world
would learn about the
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country
which have a great benefit in terms of tourism and trade for the organizing
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country
.
Finally
, hosting such
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events
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often
enhances diplomatic relations among nations which is great in maintaining
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world
peace.

On the other hand
, such
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international
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events
require
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world
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class
facilities and infrastructure and
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often
requires huge amount of economic investments and if not utilized
effectively
afterwards could dwarf the benefits.
For instance
the stadium build for commonwealth games 2002 in Manchester was later sold to
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local
football club Manchester city. Attracting
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international
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media
attention cannot guarantee a
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positive
promotion as
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media
will definitely report controversial news
as well
. During Beijing Olympics 2008, huge protests
were observed
in China over the genocide in Tibet and even this protests took a violent turn and around 22
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people
were killed
and hundreds
were injured
. Such
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events
bring
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a lot of
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negative
attention from all over the globe.

To conclude
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events
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but
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only
if they are
economically
administered
correctly
and the
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country
has no controversial issues for the
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media
to pull out of the closet.
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IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
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