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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience KOK0

Nowadays people get together for seeing a interesting activities. countries can use to opportunity for their benefits. The hosting a great sports event can have a large advantage and disadvantage for a country. In this essay i will discuss both, the positive and negative aspect of this action. At the first, the country can hold an important race up for its people in addition it could attract other population from other countries which bring a considerable amount of money to pay for their pleasure. The local population can use this opportunity to achieve more income from these tourists. In the other hand people around the world realize about our culture and interesting place in our country which is caused who do not like sports they come to our country as a tourist. While as can be seen some people does not like over population come in their country, believing a large number of persons can dirty surfaces of city also the fans can deal together in the center of city beside stores are damaged by them. Secondly they have a loud noise in the stadium or when they are going toward to place which is held an event. they must tolerate this situation because their accommodation is near the stadium. to concluded, the hosting an event especially a sport match the government must provide a grate or facilities in all the center. All happens have to be controlled be responsibilities in all the moments. If this notices are observed by countries, they can get a huge benefit at that time.

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people
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get
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use
 to opportunity for their benefits.

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event
 can have a large advantage and disadvantage for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
. In this essay Did you mean "I"?I
i
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positive
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 aspect of this action.

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, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
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important
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countries
 which bring a considerable amount of money to pay for their pleasure.

The local population can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 this opportunity to achieve more income from these tourists.

In the other hand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 around the world realize about our culture and interesting place in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
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come
 to our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 as a tourist.

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seen
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some
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people
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does
 not like over population The words "come in" and "come to" have different meanings. "Come in their office" means "have an orgasm in their office." "Come to" or "Come into" means "enter." Did you mean "come to" or "come into"?come tocome into
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country
, believing Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large number of
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 the fans can deal together in the center of city beside stores are damaged
 by them.

Secondly
 they have a loud noise in the stadium or when they are going toward to place which is held
 an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
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must
 tolerate this situation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 their accommodation is near the stadium.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
 concluded, the hosting an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
especially
 a sport match the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 provide a grate or facilities in all the center. All happens This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be controlled
 be responsibilities in all the moments. If Did you mean "these"?these
this
 notices are observed
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a huge benefit at that time. 