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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. 5Dwn
The people have an unpopular opinion for Hosting an international sports event for the country. Some of them consider it as good and while some are consider it as bad. Hosting an international event is great because it develops the interest of playing sports which is excellent for body fitness. And also it increases the reputation of their country by acheiving medals. Sportsman perform as much as possible when they play for their country because they also representing their country standards in International event. Even the country's government invest on their sports persons who are working hard to acheive their dreams and trying to represent their Country in International sports event. Organising the international sports event develop the wealth by providing entertainment to the public. Various types of people also contribute their work to an events. Sports is not only just for entertainment but also showing their skills in their respective sport they choose. Some people think that hosting an international sports is bad for the country because its depend on their country situation like financial and some other problems. Every country is not aware of importance of sports because lack of information regarding sports and it's values. They think that the input given to host the international sports event is not worth. I believe that the hosting the international sports event for the country is worthy because the country's pride can be seen in achieving medals by their respective sportsman. The healthy competition can be seen in sports between various countries. Every country has its own National Sport game. Only in international sports event, the countries and their sportsman can show what are they capable of.
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Hosting an
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international
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event
is great
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because
it develops the interest of playing
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sports
which is excellent for body fitness. And
also
it increases the reputation of their
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country
by
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acheiving
medals. Sportsman perform as much as possible when they play for their
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country
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because
they
also
representing their
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country
standards in
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International
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event
. Even the country's
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government
invest on their
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sports
persons who are working
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hard
to
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acheive
their dreams and trying to represent their
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in
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sports
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event
.
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the
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develop the wealth by providing entertainment to the public. Various types of
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people
also
contribute their work to an
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events
.
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Sports
is not
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just
for entertainment
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showing their
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skills
in their respective
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they choose.

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that hosting an
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international
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is
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for the
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its depend on their
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situation like financial and
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some
other problems. Every
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country
is not aware of importance of
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sports
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because
lack of information regarding
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and it's values. They
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that the input
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given
to host the
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international
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event
is not worth.

I believe that the hosting the
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international
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sports
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event
for the
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country
is worthy
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because
the country's pride can be
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seen
in achieving medals by their respective sportsman. The healthy competition can be
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seen
in
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sports
between various
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countries
. Every
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country
has its
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own
National
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game.
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in
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international
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sports
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event
, the
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countries
and their sportsman can
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show
what are they capable of.

IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

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