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some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that money could be better spent else where to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is thought that the local authorities waste a huge money budget on the art production and this sources of income should be directed to more valuable items. I completely agree with this point of view. First of all, each country has a limited income which should be wisely spent on items which improve the population's quality of life. For example, raising education standards within its different stages is very beneficial for the population. Upgrading and improving the schooling systems will results in a well trained personnel that meet the markets' criteria and consequently increase the economic power. Additionally, educating individuals will prevent the emergence of bio terrorism and keep the country's safety. Secondly, paying attention to the scientific research rather to arts will improve the national universities' ranking worldwide. From my point of view, there are many aspects in a badly need of evolution rather than arts such as health, traffic and railway stations. Concentration on these sectors will lead to significant amelioration of the community members' quality of life, furthermore, will increase natives' satisfaction and loyalty to their country. On the other hand, I completely disagree to pay such huge sums of money just to produce bullshit movies or programs that add no ethics to the residents. On the contrary, they spread shameful morals among the citizens. It is really considered someway of irresponsibility by the commands. For instance, a very popular weekly TV program called Abla Fahita is being broadcast from luxury studios and its presenter consuming richness clothes and accessories with no cultural content provided to the audiences. To summarize, the rational use of the public profits is crucial for society's growth. I am totally against wasting cash on producing non sense cinema films and television series, neglecting other essential sectors such as health and education as I do believe these categories are the cornerstone for progress.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that the local authorities waste a huge money budget on the art production and this sources of income should be directed
 to more valuable items. I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this point of view.

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, each country has a limited income which should be wisely
 spent on items which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the population's quality of life. For example
, raising education standards within its This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 stages is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 beneficial for the population. Upgrading and improving the schooling systems will results in a This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.well-trained
well trained
 personnel that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the markets' criteria and consequently
 increase the economic power. Additionally
, educating individuals will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 the emergence of This word is normally spelled as one.bioterrorism
bio terrorism
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the country's safety. Secondly
, paying attention to the scientific research rather
 to arts will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the national universities' ranking worldwide.

From my point of view, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 aspects in a You used an adverb (‘badly’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘need’) instead of another adjective.
badly need
 of evolution rather
 than arts such as health, traffic and railway stations. Concentration on these sectors will lead to significant amelioration of the community members' quality of life, furthermore
, will increase natives' satisfaction and loyalty to their country.

On the other hand
, I completely disagree to pay such huge sums of money This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 to produce bullshit movies or programs that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 no ethics to the residents. On the contrary
, they spread shameful morals among the citizens. It is really
 considered someway of irresponsibility by the commands. For instance
, a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 popular weekly TV program called Possible spelling mistake found.AbleAlbaAblyTablaABAABL
Abla
Possible spelling mistake found.Fajita
Fahita
 is being broadcast from luxury studios and its presenter consuming richness clothes and accessories with no cultural content provided to the audiences.

To summarize
, the rational This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of the public profits is crucial for society's growth. I am totally
 against wasting cash on producing This word is normally spelled as one.nonsense
non sense
 cinema films and television series, neglecting other essential sectors such as health and education as I do believe these categories are the cornerstone for progress. 