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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. ONBG
Environmental problems have already almost become irreversible threats for humankind. However, while some believe that it is better to tackle these problems on a local scale, I agree with those who feel that it should be done on a global scale. On the one hand, it could be argued that only remedy to climate change could be implemented by local authorities. Those who support this approach say that international partnership usually fails to find effective solutions to these problems compared to national unities who have thorough understanding about the nation's climate, culture and people's lifestyles. Moreover, oftentimes international aids give only conditional offers to countries, such as high rate bank loans. As a result, countries might go into heavy debts, which prevent its economic prosperity and leads to a possible crisis. As climate change very possibly crosses boundaries, there will be high demand for global collaboration than ever before, and I firmly believe that there are many positive aspects to tackling against environmental problems this way. Firstly, collaboration between nations results in diversity of innovative ideas from professional scientists, which eventually leads to flawless outcomes. In my opinion, one of the benefits of cooperation is that it can take place around financing at the same time. Creating international funds also may help countries in order to cover the expenses for equipment, salaries of employees, and other basic costs. Especially, less developed countries would benefit the most and it keeps their projects' continuity against climate related issues. To conclude, although local authorities may know their conditions better and it would be cheaper to tackle with their own resources, I believe that quality of solutions and financial aids they get from international organizations gives them many opportunities to respond to different environmental threats more quickly and effectively.
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problems
have already almost become irreversible threats for humankind.
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some
believe that it is better to tackle these
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on a local scale, I
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agree
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be done
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only
remedy to
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climate
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change
could
be implemented
by local authorities. Those who support this approach say that
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international
partnership
usually
fails to find effective solutions to these
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problems
compared to national unities who have thorough understanding about the nation's
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climate
, culture and
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people
's lifestyles.
Moreover
, oftentimes
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international
aids give
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only
conditional offers to
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countries
, such as high rate bank loans.
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,
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countries
might go into heavy debts, which
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prevent
its economic prosperity and leads to a possible crisis.

As
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climate
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change
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very
possibly
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, and I
firmly
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many
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positive
aspects to tackling against environmental
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problems
this way.
Firstly
, collaboration between nations results in diversity of innovative
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ideas
from professional scientists, which
eventually
leads to flawless outcomes. In my opinion, one of the benefits of cooperation is that it can take place around financing at the same time. Creating
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international
funds
also
may
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help
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countries
in order to cover the expenses for equipment, salaries of employees, and other basic costs.
Especially
, less developed
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countries
would benefit the most and it
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keeps
their projects' continuity against
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climate
related issues.

To conclude
, although local authorities may know their conditions better and it would be cheaper to tackle with their
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own
resources, I believe that quality of solutions and financial aids they
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get
from
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international
organizations gives them
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many
opportunities to respond to
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different
environmental threats more
quickly
and
effectively
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.

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6.0
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