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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. DjBo
It is believed by some that environmental issues should The environment has now become the one of the most serious concerns that need to be tackled curved. While others opine that persons argued that the problem associated with the environment should be controlled globally whereas opponents of this think that it can be easily handle by nationwide. In my opinion, I believe that this matter should be cracked by every individual globalize due its severity. On the one hand, sometimes even after finding the problem, it may be difficult for underdeveloped nations to tackle that due to poor knowledge of handling the concern. Then, powerful international bodies like United State of America, are needed who could identify the actual reason behind the problem by using collaborative approach with other countries. Apart from that there are some serious environmental issues that need lots of funds for the solution. However, poor countries have very low budget and less development of technology to utilize for saving the environment. Therefore, cooperation and contribution of the whole world is required to resolve the problem. On the other hand, environmental concerns differ from nation to nation. While some countries are suffering from high rate of air pollution, others are high rate facing deforestation. A feasible solution can be taken by country only after considering the various factors. Such as, industrial areas is more vulnerable at high rate of air pollution. Hence, the government could pass and implement the environmental laws for factories in order to take control on them. In my opinion, since the environmental problems effect the whole world, then it could figure out collectively with other nations. By collaborating with global, there would not be scarcity of resource that are lacked by underdeveloped nations.
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is believed
by
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some
that
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environmental
issues should The environment has
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now
become the one of the most serious concerns that need to
be tackled
curved. While others opine that persons argued that the
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problem
associated with the environment should
be controlled
globally whereas opponents of this
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think
that it can be
easily
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handle
by nationwide. In my opinion, I believe that this matter should
be cracked
by every individual globalize due its severity.

On the one hand,
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sometimes
even after finding the
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problem
, it may be difficult for underdeveloped
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nations
to tackle that due to poor knowledge of handling the concern. Then, powerful international bodies like United State of America,
are needed
who could identify the actual reason behind the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
by using collaborative approach with
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other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
. Apart from that there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
serious
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environmental
issues that need lots of funds for the solution.
However
, poor
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countries
have
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very
low budget and less development of technology to utilize for saving the environment.
Therefore
, cooperation and contribution of the whole world
is required
to resolve the problem.

On the
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other
hand,
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environmental
concerns differ from
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nation
to
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nation
. While
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some
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countries
are suffering from high rate of air pollution, others are high rate facing deforestation. A feasible solution can
be taken
by
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country
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
after considering the various factors. Such as, industrial areas is more vulnerable at high rate of air pollution.
Hence
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
could pass and implement the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
laws for factories in order to take control on them.

In my opinion, since the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
effect the whole world, then it could figure out
collectively
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nations
. By collaborating with global, there would not be scarcity of resource that
are lacked
by underdeveloped
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nations
.

IELTS essay Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.

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290 words
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