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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree

The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. P23J
In the modern era, enhancement of technology is truning as a vital factor for the development in the security system of a conuntry. Due to this there is a hudge reduction in the crime rate compared to the past. I parsonally believe that scientific development helps the prohibition of many crimes To begin with, the biggest reason why the criminal activities are declined is due to the upgraded security and surveillance system. To elaborate with the help of the improved surveillance equipment like CCTV camera we are able to get clear photos and videos of the culprit. So police officers can easily recognize the criminals and catch them in a short period of time. For instance police arrested a famous business man Drew Peterson for killing his own wife Stacy Peterson, in this case a CCTV camera placed in front of a bank help US police to collect the key evidence to aresst him. Moreover, in the present scenario the introduction of new biometric help to strengthen the security in many fileds. Banks and highly secure places use different kinds of physiological biometric like face recognition, fingerprint, hand and iris recognition as thire security protection measures. Furthermore, mobile tracking is another huge technical improvement to prevent crime. To elaborate cyber security wing can easily find the location of the offender. So cop only need to consentrate on that particular area to arrest that criminal. For example a theif in mumbai was caught by mumbai police by using simple mobile tracking method. He accidentally taken a mobile with other ithem including gold ornaments from a house. So that mobile trune as his villan. In conclusion, I strongly believe that technical inventions of CCTV camera in the field of surveillance system and introduction of mobile tracking method plays a key role in the reduction of crime rates
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truning
as a vital factor for the development in the
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security
system of a
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conuntry
. Due to this there is a
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hudge
reduction in the
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crime
rate compared to the past. I
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parsonally
believe that scientific development
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helps
the prohibition of
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many
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crimes
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begin
with, the biggest reason why the criminal activities
are declined
is due to the upgraded
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security
and surveillance system. To elaborate with the
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help
of the
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improved
surveillance equipment like CCTV camera we are able to
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get
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clear
photos and videos of the culprit.
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So
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police
officers can
easily
recognize the criminals and catch them in a short period of time.
For instance
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police
arrested a
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famous
business
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man
Drew Peterson for killing his
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own
wife Stacy Peterson,
in this case
a CCTV camera placed in front of a bank
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help
US
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police
to collect the key evidence to
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aresst
him.
Moreover
, in the present scenario the introduction of new biometric
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help
to strengthen the
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security
in
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many
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fileds
. Banks and
highly
secure places
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use
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different
kinds of physiological biometric like face recognition, fingerprint, hand and iris recognition as
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thire
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security
protection measures.
Furthermore
, mobile tracking is another huge technical improvement to
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prevent
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crime
. To elaborate cyber
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security
wing can
easily
find the location of the offender.
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So
cop
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only
need to
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consentrate
on that particular area to arrest that criminal.
For example
a
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theif
in
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mumbai
was caught
by
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mumbai
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police
by using simple mobile tracking method. He
accidentally
taken a mobile with other
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ithem
including gold ornaments from a
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house
.
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that mobile
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trune
as his
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villan
.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that technical inventions of CCTV camera in the field of surveillance system and introduction of mobile tracking method plays a key role in the reduction of
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crime
rates
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IELTS essay The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime.

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304 words
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