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What do you miss most about your hone when you are away?

What do you miss most about your hone when you are away? QNdX
What I miss most about my home when I'm away are my family and the comfortable feeling. For my family, it's the time that all family gets together. Sometimes we talk about the TV show and at other times we talk about our daily life. For the comfortable feeling, it's because I can go to bed most of the time. People know me and I know the people. It takes a long time to build this comfortable feeling in a new place. These are what I don't have when I'm far away from my home.
What I miss most about my home when I'm away are my family and the comfortable feeling. For my family, it's the
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that all family
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we talk about our daily life. For the comfortable feeling, it's
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know me and I know the
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. It takes a long
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to build this comfortable feeling in a new place. These are what I don't have when I'm far away from my home.
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IELTS essay What do you miss most about your hone when you are away?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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