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Some people think that education is the most important thing to be successful in life. To what extend do you agree disagree with this?

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It is considered by many people that education is very compulsory for reaching high levels in life. I completely agree with this opinion and think that knowledge should be our first priority in life. First of all, I think that education would be a path which will lead us during life. It could change the way we think, interpret or percept the world: as people, environment, books and etc. Whereas it amendment our behavior and manners toward specific things. For example, the knowledge which we had at school will not remain the same by finishing university. Mankind won’t have stop exploring, discovering, inventing and learning. All above mentioned things relate to education so it was and stay an integral part of our existence. Secondly, it is vivid that in every field of working or leading any group or community required high education. In the places where we will be for the first time it would our representative and likewise, initially information about us. There are a variety type of education which depends to certain major so basically it’s diversified and has the level of impotency in many ways. For example, medical majors have huge differences between economics which could not interconnect anyway and each of them has their mission in society. This also shows us how there are numerous of jobs and the only needs and wants is education. To conclude, I strongly believe to the idea that education is significant to human and allows to be successful in life.

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