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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.

Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. 087l
The recent change in climate has caught the attention of different nations around the world. While a great number of individuals argue that it is up to the developed countries to find a sustainable solution to this global crisis, instead, many agree that developing as well as developed nations have the responsibility to keep the environment safe and clean. In my opinion I disagree with the latter as most developing nations lack the resources to tackle climate change
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in climate has caught the attention of
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nations around the world. While a great number of individuals argue that it is up to the
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developed countries
to find a sustainable solution to this global crisis,
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the environment safe and clean. In my opinion I disagree with the latter as most developing nations lack the resources to tackle climate
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IELTS essay Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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