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Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teacher want to do but other think that children controlled to much can't deal with problems well by themselves.discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teacher want to do but other think that children controlled to much can't deal with problems well by themselves. discuss both views and give your opinion 6RD0

Nobody can deny that children are tender buds of nations, they will generalise the world. some assume that pupils ought to obey the regulation which are made by their families and tutors. other think that if children are controlled too much, they unable to tackle their situation. i will discuss my point of views in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are considerable number of points related to children. Firstly, if offsprings follow their parents, they would learn true values as well as social to proceed the life forward. Secondly, nowadays, because of modern era, technology is increasing day by day hence pupils use more electronic gadgets to play video games, watching movies which is effected the vision so that s why parents desires to, they spend plenty of time to play videos.

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generalise
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 assume that pupils ought to obey the regulation which are made
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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they
 unable to tackle their situation. Did you mean "I"?I
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 will discuss my point of views in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are considerable number of points related to children. Firstly
, if Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "offspring", the plural form of the noun 'offspring'?offspringoff springs
offsprings
 follow their parents, they would learn true values as well
 as social to proceed the life forward. Secondly
, nowadays, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of modern era, technology is increasing day by day hence
 pupils This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 more electronic gadgets to play video games, watching movies which is effected
 the vision This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that s why parents desires to, they spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of time to play videos. 