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Crime is increasing at high rate in the world. You give your opinion.

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Crime is being become the mammoth problem for community, jailbirds perpetration the deliquent acts since bourgeois have no opportunity to attain the job. unemployment is the leading cause of antisocial which can put cast an adverse effect on social so i demm that through the cyberspace people can heighten awareness in around the world. Bourgeois need to turn a new leaf for declined the felony. Nobody is criminal by birth but the circumstances and situations of the like make them offenders. Punishment should vary according to crime committed, gender, age of the culprit.
Crime is
being become
the mammoth problem for community, jailbirds perpetration the
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deliquent
acts since bourgeois have no opportunity to attain the job.
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unemployment
is the leading cause of antisocial which can put cast an adverse effect on social
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so
i
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demm
that through the cyberspace
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people
can heighten awareness in around the world. Bourgeois need to turn a new leaf for declined the felony. Nobody is criminal by birth
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but
the circumstances and situations of the like
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make
them offenders. Punishment should vary according to crime committed, gender, age of the culprit.

IELTS essay Crime is increasing at high rate in the world. You give your opinion.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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