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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important.

Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. RKbW

According to a variety of studies, children who learn to compete against one another do better in school. In other words, student competition motivates them to succeed in their studies or activities, resulting in increased academic success and outcomes. Furthermore, it is generally believed that children must develop these skills in order to excel later in life as they must compete against others in the job market.

According to a variety of studies, children who learn to compete against one another do better in school. In other words
, student competition motivates them to succeed in their studies or activities, resulting in increased academic success and outcomes. Furthermore
, it is generally
 believed that children This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 develop these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 in order to excel later in life as they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 compete against others in the job market. 