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Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better.Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

As people's preferences for transport rapidly changing these days in Urban areas. While a bunch of people believes that automobiles are the best means of transportation to be used in cities, others state that bicycles are better alternatives. This essay will shed light on the ideal use of urban commutation. To begin with, Private cars are an attractive means of transportation in major cities. They make traveling convenient and save time, moreover, cars provide private space and luxury. Also, someone driving a car is not exposed to harsh weather. For example, In Canada where the temperature reaches a freezing point in winter. In such extreme weather conditions, it is impossible to use public transport. However, there are overhead costs such as fuel, maintenance, and repair, finding parking spaces is another principle obstacle in utilizing private cars Bicycles as a mode of transportation in urban regions, on the other hand, are fascinating alternatives. They help to improve the physical fitness of riders and also control obesity-related health illnesses. A study showed that a daily 30 minutes bicycle ride can mitigate the risk of hypertension, diabetes, and bad lipid disorders. Additionally, bicycles are an eco-friendly means of transportation. However, Bicycles are a slow mode of transportation and cannot carry any load. It is a risky vehicle one can cover only short distances To conclude. Even though bicycles help save and protect the environment however they can only be used for shorter distances. Private Cars are a superior alternative because of their efficiency and the comfort they provide for riders moreover they are most preferred during extreme weather conditions.
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people
's preferences for transport
rapidly
changing these days in Urban areas. While a bunch of
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people
believes that automobiles are the best means of
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transportation
to be
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used
in cities, others state that
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bicycles
are better alternatives. This essay will shed light on the ideal
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use
of urban commutation.

To
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begin
with,
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Private
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cars
are an attractive means of
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transportation
in major cities. They
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make
traveling convenient and save time,
moreover
,
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cars
provide
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private
space and luxury.
Also
, someone driving a
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car
is not exposed to harsh weather.
For example
, In Canada where the temperature reaches a freezing point in winter. In such extreme weather conditions, it is impossible to
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use
public transport.
However
, there are overhead costs such as fuel, maintenance, and repair, finding parking spaces is another principle obstacle in utilizing
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private
cars

Bicycles as a mode of
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transportation
in urban regions,
on the other hand
, are fascinating alternatives. They
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help
to
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improve
the physical fitness of riders and
also
control obesity-related health illnesses. A study
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showed
that a daily 30 minutes
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bicycle
ride can mitigate the
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risk
of hypertension, diabetes, and
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bad
lipid disorders.
Additionally
,
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bicycles
are an eco-friendly means of
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transportation
.
However
,
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Bicycles
are a slow mode of
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transportation
and cannot carry any load. It is a risky vehicle one can cover
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only
short
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distances


To conclude
.
Even though
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bicycles
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help
save and protect the environment
however
they can
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only
be
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used
for shorter distances.
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Private
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Cars
are a superior alternative
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because
of their efficiency and the comfort they provide for riders
moreover
they are most preferred during extreme weather conditions.
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IELTS essay Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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