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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. JOyk
education system had been change and still evolving with the pass of time. Educational systems had been always in debate on various issues one of them is some people beilive that children must choose there university subjects of there own wish while in conrastpeople think that it is important for to choose science and technology as a subjects as part of there university studies. this essay consents with the above statements and inclinations towards it would be justified in the ensuring passage. adequate evidences are obtained about the students excelling well in the courses which they choose of their interest. Nowadays people opt for various courses and various fields not only limited to science and technology or just to mathemetics. People who has shown excellent result neccessay are intested in science related fileds like medical, biologist, parmesist so on but many times they end up being unstaistfied with their job professionals. vocational courses had also drastically grown. Billioners and Millioners are just science students instead they just reach the peak become famous thought their own interest. if they are intersted in the subjects they would try to work hard towards its and gain more knowledge rather then by just burdening them our wishes. Most important reason for letting children decided their own fields of interest, it would helps to create own and know own ideas as well as increases decision making power. WHILE MANY RESEARCH CONDUCTED that university children attempts more sucides because they does not able to copeup with subjects and not interested. science and technology subjects has a phelorathe benefits to list few are helps to understand about human body functioning, plants and animals, atmosphere and many more. The competition is to tough as more and more people get into it as many people had considered as traditional course or important for future living. due to which many times job insecurities or unemployment arises due to which these students also end up obtain for another courses or obtain job which is not part of there studies. The final analysis is that our world need each type of people to work for instance we need a plumber, we also need a automobile engineer w=on other hand we also need scientist to discover different things. One must stuck to single ideas explore and must except the changes let the children also o on their own.
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evolving with the pass of time. Educational systems had been always in debate on various issues one of them is
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some
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people
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beilive
that
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children
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must
choose there university
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subjects
of there
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wish while in
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conrastpeople
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think
that it is
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important
for to choose
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science
and technology as a
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subjects
as part of there university studies.
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this
essay consents with the above statements and inclinations towards it would
be justified
in the ensuring passage.
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adequate
evidences
are obtained
about the students excelling well in the
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courses
which they choose of their interest. Nowadays
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people
opt for various
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courses
and various fields not
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only
limited to
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science
and technology or
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just
to
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mathemetics
.
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who
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has
shown excellent result
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neccessay
are
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intested
in
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science
related
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fileds
like medical, biologist,
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parmesist
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so
on
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many
times they
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end
up being
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unstaistfied
with their job professionals.
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vocational
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courses
had
also
drastically
grown.
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and
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are
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science
students
instead
they
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just
reach the peak become
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famous
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thought
their
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own
interest.
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if
they are
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intersted
in the
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subjects
they would try to work
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hard
towards its and gain more knowledge
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then
by
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burdening them our wishes. Most
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important
reason for letting
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children
decided their
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own
fields of interest, it would
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helps
to create
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own
and know
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as well
as increases
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decision making
power. WHILE
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CONDUCTED that university
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they
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not able to
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with
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subjects
and not interested.

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science
and technology
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subjects
has a
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benefits to list few are
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helps
to understand about human body functioning, plants and animals, atmosphere and
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many
more. The competition is to tough as more and more
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people
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get
into it as
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many
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people
had considered as traditional
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course
or
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important
for future living.
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due
to which
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times job insecurities or unemployment arises due to which these students
also
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up obtain for another
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courses
or obtain job which is not part of
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studies. The final analysis is that our world
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each type of
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people
to work
for instance
we
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a plumber, we
also
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a
automobile engineer w=on other hand we
also
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scientist to discover
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different
things. One
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must
stuck to single
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ideas
explore and
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must
except the
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changes
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the
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children
also
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IELTS essay Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
395 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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