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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. 3mYm
Students ought to be interested on their field, which is depentdent on them, or they have to be brought befenits in the future by adults, that separate two sides. According to them, positive effects should be connected with science, also technology. Nowadays, there are different types of people at the outside, so that young people have a various of fields even all of the topic. Additionally, universities and humankind are cultivating themselves. In fact, folks should possess the quality of workers; however, humans can be unharmful in many years, institutions will rise and eligible their lecturers. On foot, we can see these effectivenesses on some countries, which are defended the statement, such as Sillicon Valley in the United Kingdom. Higher education centers must be increased their programs, because humankind needs to find details about their fields. Likewise, humans will not have a bright future. Furthermore, vital subjects, that are science, and technology, have to be eligible for used by people. Although we will try and in order to our genre will fall apart, as well as the life will not be easy rather than at the present. The day after tomorrow, we ensure that departments in universities, that are as mentioned earlier, demand more budgets, when they open quotas for the learner. Otherwise, we have to force to states for our generations. Notably, every single field is with reference to each other, so we ought not to be lose our high potential youngsters. To conclude, old-aged people though that we have to force for our future or we need to relief. From my perspective, we must need music types, physic, biology, marketing even traveler, so that we have a population, which is gone up, after that we can improve and find a couple of invention. We have previously done while we are not having plenty to allow the kind of topics.
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befenits
in the future by adults, that separate two sides.

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positive
effects should
be connected
with science,
also
technology.

Nowadays, there are
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different
types of
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people
at the outside,
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so
that young
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people
have
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a various of
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fields
even
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all of the
topic.
Additionally
, universities and humankind are cultivating themselves. In fact, folks should possess the quality of workers;
however
, humans can be unharmful in
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many
years, institutions will rise and eligible their lecturers.

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see
these
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effectivenesses
on
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some
countries, which
are defended
the statement, such as
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Sillicon
Valley in the United Kingdom.

Higher education centers
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must
 
be increased
their programs,
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because
humankind needs to find
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details
about their
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fields
.
Likewise
, humans will not have a bright future.

Furthermore
, vital subjects, that are science, and technology,
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have to
be eligible for
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used
by
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people
. Although we will 
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try and
in order to our genre will fall apart,
as well
as the life will not be easy
rather
than at the present. The day after tomorrow, we ensure that departments in universities, that are as mentioned earlier, demand more budgets, when they open quotas for the learner.
Otherwise
, we
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have to
force to states for our generations.
Notably
, every single
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field
is with reference to each other,
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so
we ought not to be
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lose
our high potential youngsters.

To conclude
,
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old
-aged
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people
though that we
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have to
force for our
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future or
we need to relief. From my perspective, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
need music types, physic, biology, marketing even traveler,
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so
that we have a population, which
is gone
up, after that we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
and find a couple of invention. We have previously done while we are not having
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plenty
to
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allow
 the kind of topics.
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IELTS essay Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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298 words
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