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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community . do you agree or disagree

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. KGWKw
A lot of human remember that all over teenagers should be required to do not paid work in their free time to assist the local community. In my view that was right way to helped local community although that was depended the human society. The local community helped that was good for personage as well as understand how can you talk older people. Together the local community aid then acknowledge how can improve team work. One handed that was numberous benefits for the human society. However, if young people are forced to spend their time on unpaid work, it may resentment and the feling of unfairness among them. Most young people are already wonderful places with their studies without being given the added responsibility at working in their time. In in conclusion teenagers decided that how can help them local community, however that was not necessary
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IELTS essay Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
145 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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