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Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities .to what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. Use specific details and examples to explain your view. 0gOq
Nodubts, youngers always prefer to do their work in groups or teams and they can get more benefits when they doing group activities, scientific works are always depend on the team management and an individuals can improve their skills through it, I think it is a better way for everyone, I am partially agree with given statement. I will explain the reasons in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, an individuals suffer with many conditions in their daily life and they can get the more knowledge about the behavior in society. They get the experience because they met with new people with new ideas. They receive the way of co- operation with others. By participating in group activities, individuals can learn about how they can fellow rules and regulations. For instance, according to international survey, that article said that, in America, 65% companies and schools provide the chance of team work to citizens which are very helpful to improve their skills. They can increase their creativity and can get the chance to express their views in front of others. Companies can increase their productivity and they can produce more ideas with different results. Therefore, group activities are very beneficial to increase the confidence level of an individuals and they always try to express their skills in better way as compare to others. On other side, everyone has a different nature and they always show interest in different activities. Some people do not give the preference to the team work because they think that it create more disturbance in work because everyone can do their work in own speed. In scientific researches, they get the more inputs through team work and they always confused with it. An individuals think that the disturbance and other problems are controlled by monitor or guider in group activities. People can get more facilities and opportunities without team work. In conclusion, people can improve their skills through various ways such as team work. They should get a chance to met with new people. Teamwork increase capabilities of an individuals and make an individuals a leader and a perfect future professionals. Therefor, it is high time for the schools and society to encourage group activities on higher scales
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teams and
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get
more benefits when
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they doing
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group
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activities
, scientific works are always
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team
management and an
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individuals
can
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improve
their
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skills
through it, I
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think
it is a better way for everyone, I am
partially
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agree
with
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given
statement. I will
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explain
the reasons in upcoming paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, an
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individuals
suffer with
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many
conditions in their daily
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life and
they can
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get
the more knowledge about the behavior in society. They
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get
the experience
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because
they met with new
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people
with new
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ideas
. They receive the way of co- operation with others. By participating in
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group
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activities
,
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individuals
can learn about how they can fellow
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rules
and regulations.
For instance
, according to international survey, that article said that, in America, 65%
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companies
and schools provide the chance of
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team
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work
to citizens which are
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very
helpful to
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improve
their
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skills
. They can
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increase
their creativity and can
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get
the chance to express their views in front of others.
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Companies
can
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increase
their
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productivity and
they can produce more
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ideas
with
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different
results.
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,
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group
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activities
are
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very
beneficial to
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increase
the confidence level of an
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individuals and
they always try to express their
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skills
in better way as compare to others.

On
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side, everyone has a
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different
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nature and
they always
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show
interest in
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different
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activities
.
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people
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team
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work
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because
they
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that it create more disturbance in
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work
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because
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work
in
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own
speed. In scientific researches, they
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get
the more inputs through
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team
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work and
they always confused with it. An
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individuals
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think
that the disturbance and
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are controlled
by monitor or guider in
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group
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activities
.
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People
can
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more facilities and opportunities without
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team
work.

In conclusion
,
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people
can
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improve
their
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skills
through various ways such as
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team
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work
. They should
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get
a chance to met with new
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people
. Teamwork
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increase
capabilities of an
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individuals
and
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make
an
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individuals
a leader and a perfect future
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professionals
. Therefor, it is high time for the schools and society to encourage
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group
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activities
on higher scales
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IELTS essay Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
369 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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