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some people think student should take subjects which are decided by government at universities others think student can apply for the subjects they prefer. discuss both views and state your views

some people think student should take subjects which are decided by government at universities others think student can apply for the subjects they prefer. discuss both views and state your views g2RD
Education is more impotant in a student life. Every student have their own passion of learning, they have their own favourite fields to take complete. In this essay, however, some people believe students should take subjects which are decided by government. Some others think can apply for the subjects they prefer. This essay discuss, both the view points. Initially, in certain colleges provide courses to student to apply based on their scores achieved earlier. In addition to that, if they studied that prefered subjects. The student get all kind of concession such as reduction, scholarship, and so on. For example, when a student got an admission in an government college, the government should decide a subject for that particular student. This student opportunity for studying as he/she wished is declined their. Moreover, if a student pick up a subject with his/her own need, he will not get any type of concessions. But he/she will study according to their passion. At that field they can shine as a star. Education is most needed for student, they need to achieve their dreams. For instance, there are many universities other than government which are providing courses as preference to the students. After evaluating the topic, to conclude that, student have the right decide their subjects to study. The government decision are not needed in this area. Their decision will lead to some matter of harmful.
Education is more
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impotant
in a
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student
life. Every
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student
have
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their
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own
passion of learning, they have their
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own
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favourite
fields to take complete. In this essay,
however
,
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some
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people
believe
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students
should take
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subjects
which
are decided
by
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government
.
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Some
others
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think
can apply for the
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subjects
they prefer.
The verb 'discuss' is plural. Did you mean: "This essay discusses"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
This essay discuss
, both the view points.

Initially
, in certain colleges provide courses to
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student
to apply based on their scores achieved earlier.
In addition
to that, if they studied that
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prefered
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subjects
. The
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student
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get
all kind of concession such as reduction, scholarship, and
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so
on.

For example
, when a
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student
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got
an admission in
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an
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government
college, the
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government
should decide a
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subject
for that particular
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student
. This
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student
opportunity for studying as he/she wished
is declined
their.

Moreover
, if a
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student
pick up a
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subject
with his/her
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own
need, he will not
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get
any type of concessions.
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But
he/she will study according to their passion. At that field they can shine as a star. Education is most needed for
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student
, they need to achieve their dreams.
For instance
, there are
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many
universities other than
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government
which are providing courses as preference to the students.

After evaluating the topic,
to conclude
that,
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student
have the right decide their
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subjects
to study. The
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government
decision are not needed in this area. Their decision will lead to
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some
matter of harmful.
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IELTS essay some people think student should take subjects which are decided by government at universities others think student can apply for the subjects they prefer. discuss both views and state your views

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