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Some people think student should evaluate and criticize teachers. others believe it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in classroom . discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think student should evaluate and criticize teachers. others believe it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in classroom. discuss both views and give your opinion xa729
It is considered by certain individuals evaluating and giving feedback to teachers is essential according to children. On the contrary, others argued that it will tend to disrespect and indiscipline in classroom such a student will not afraid from teachers. In my opinion, evaluating and criticizing teachers is good. I will discuss both notions in upcoming paragraphs. Teachers can improve their mistakes as well as change their teaching method according to the interest of the children. To elaborate it, if they take feedback from toddlers then they will try to do more better which is a productive way for students. It is not only beneficial for teachers but students also. They can burgeon their confidence in the front of teachers. To exemplify, recent studies shows that 74% children criticized teachers and with the help of this teachers change their method. Hence, it will be helpful for their career. On the controversial side, why others argued that it will tend to disrespect and break discipline. owing to the fact that teachers have alot of experience and also they know which way is best for teaching the children, due to this, if students give feedback or suggestions to teachers then they will feel insulted as well as uncomfortable. Besides this, toddlers will not afraid from teachers. To epitome, 33% teachers feel disrespected while listening opinions from children Consequently, it will put some bad effects on a teacher's life. In conclusion, although it will result in disrespect and break discipline in the classroom. Nevertheless, giving feedback to teachers is better because they can change their teaching method as well as improve their mistakes.
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by certain individuals evaluating and giving
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feedback
to
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teachers
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children
.
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, others argued that it will tend to disrespect and indiscipline in classroom such a
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student
will not
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afraid from
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teachers
. In my opinion, evaluating and criticizing
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teachers
is
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good
. I will discuss both notions in upcoming paragraphs.

Teachers can
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improve
their mistakes
as well
as
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change
their teaching method according to the interest of the
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children
. To elaborate it, if they take
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feedback
from toddlers then they will try to do
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more better
which is a productive way for
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students
. It is not
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teachers
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students
also
. They can burgeon their confidence in the front of
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teachers
. To exemplify, recent studies
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that 74%
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children
criticized
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teachers
and with the
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help
of
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teachers
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change
their method.
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, it will be helpful for their career.

On the controversial side, why others argued that it will tend to disrespect and break discipline.
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teachers
have
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alot
of experience and
also
they know which way is best for teaching the
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children
, due to this, if
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students
give
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feedback
or suggestions to
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teachers
then they will feel insulted
as well
as uncomfortable.
Besides
this, toddlers will not
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afraid from
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teachers
. To epitome, 33%
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teachers
feel disrespected while listening opinions from
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children
Consequently
, it will put
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some
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bad
effects on a teacher's life.

In conclusion
, although it will result in disrespect and break discipline in the classroom.
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, giving
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feedback
to
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teachers
is better
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because
they can
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change
their teaching method
as well
as
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improve
their mistakes.
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IELTS essay Some people think student should evaluate and criticize teachers. others believe it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in classroom. discuss both views and give your opinion

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