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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. QNOb
Our Life consist of two essential groups, one of them are family members and the other one are friends. They both facilitate, change and improve our thinking. External friendship groups sometimes become closer than family. In other words, they can also become part of our family, daily life and activities. As a matter of fact, a number of people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Unlike others who believe it’s good to have friends that disagree with them. For that, this subject has various opinions. On the one hand, our friends live with us the most critical days, from the crazy ones to the sad and hardest ones. They fight with us, they support us and become our shield. Moreover, they help us solve our problems and give us myriad of advices. Due to this particular reason, their ideas ought to be homogenous with ours. In addition, their way of thinking should be similar to our mode, as well as Their point of interest have to be identical. All of that, will definitely lead to a friendship agreement and a successful communication process. On the other hand, usually the real bond between friends is not chosen, it happens in a immensely spontaneous way. However, controversial ideas can also be advantageous. A simple way to elucidate that is with magnetic objects, their vibes need not be exactly the same. On the contrary, to attract each other they shall be different. To illustrate this, we can think of the perfect match friendship, it doesn’t consist of having same point of views, but of having extremely different individuals uncompleted to reunite and complete each other. This is another key fact to remember of humans in general and friendship in particular. To sum up, everything that has been stated so far confirm that opinions matter. I would like to point out that it can engender a serious problem between friends if not treated wisely and intelligently. Besides, age and conscience must be taken into consideration, whereas they can negatively or positively impact the process of dealing with controversial opinions.
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one are
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. They both facilitate,
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change
and
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improve
our thinking. External
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friendship
groups
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sometimes
become closer than family. In
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other
words, they can
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become part of our family, daily life and activities. As a matter of fact, a number of
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people
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it’s better to choose
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friends
who always have the same opinions as them. Unlike others who believe it’s
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to have
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friends
that disagree with them. For that, this subject has various opinions.

On the one hand, our
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friends
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with us the most critical days, from the crazy
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to the sad and hardest
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ones
. They fight with us, they support us and become our shield.
Moreover
, they
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help
us solve our problems and give us myriad of advices. Due to this particular reason, their
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ideas
ought to be homogenous with ours.
In addition
, their way of thinking should be similar to our mode,
as well
as Their point of interest
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have to
be identical. All of that, will definitely lead to a
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friendship
agreement and a successful communication process.

On the
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hand,
usually
the real bond between
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friends
is not chosen, it happens in
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a
immensely
spontaneous way.
However
, controversial
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ideas
can
also
be advantageous. A simple way to elucidate
that is
with magnetic objects, their vibes need not be exactly the same.
On the contrary
, to attract each
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other
they shall be
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different
. To illustrate this, we can
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think
of the perfect match
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friendship
, it doesn’t consist of having same point of views,
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but
of having
extremely
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different
individuals uncompleted to reunite and complete each
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other
. This is another key fact to remember of humans
in general
and
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friendship
in particular
.

To sum up, everything that has
been stated
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so
far confirm that opinions matter. I would like to point out that it can engender a serious problem between
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friends
if not treated
wisely
and
intelligently
.
Besides
, age and conscience
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must
be taken
into consideration, whereas they can
negatively
or
positively
impact the process of dealing with controversial opinions.
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IELTS essay Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

Essay
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4 paragraphs
353 words
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