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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Dk66
parenting a child is always been an important aspect regarding in child's behavioural growth, in develpoment of mantal health to the learnings of life in all situation, parents action and reaction always have a vital role to play in a life where child can be achieved massive success or struggle to get better way in a life. I tend to deem that if there should be a school who stimulates the parenting situations and method of tackeling and augment the child's abilities to attain something then myriad numbers of child will have a exequite care. Firstly, Parenting is not just about raise a child but it will also important how you will do in and which path you obtain to reach there. A father should have ability to understand and show a direction to walk on right roads and have always a open chatroom where child can discuss his problems and A mother should have a character who seems like pillar for emotional breakdowns whenever a child will have and a teacher who teaches how to behave in a polite manner or how to live life such lesson which are not taught in schools. For Example, University of Mumbai had a reasearch and conclude that in India, a father and a mother's relationship have great impact on child's mental health and in behaviour. In a school, young people should have lessons of how to raise child and there will have a situational practicals where they can learn the ability. there should have a lessons on child's mental health and how to be supportive and how to recongnize that child have mental issue. To recapitulate, from my point of view, Young people is next generation of parents, if there is a school who build great base then earth will be a have a great place to live where there is less crime and well mannered people will be living.
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parenting
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behavioural
growth, in
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of
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health to the learnings of
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in all situation, parents action and reaction always have a vital role to play in a
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life
where
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child
can
be achieved
massive success or struggle to
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get
better way in a
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life
. I tend to deem that if there should be a
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school
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who
stimulates the parenting situations and method of
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tackeling
and augment the
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child's
abilities to attain something then myriad numbers of
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child
will have
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a
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exequite
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Firstly
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about raise a
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also
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important
how you will do in and which path you obtain to reach there. A father should have ability to understand and
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show
a direction to walk on right roads and have always
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a
open chatroom where
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child
can discuss his problems and A mother should have a character
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who
seems like pillar for emotional breakdowns whenever a
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child
will have and a teacher
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who
teaches how to behave
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in a polite manner
or how to
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live
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life
such lesson which are not taught in
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schools
.
For Example
, University of Mumbai had a
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reasearch
and conclude that in India, a father and a mother's relationship have great impact on
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child's
mental health and in
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behaviour
.

In a
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, young
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people
should have lessons of how to raise
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child
and there will have a situational
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practicals
where they can learn the ability.
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there
should have a lessons on
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child's
mental health and how to be supportive and how to
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recongnize
that
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child
have mental issue.

To recapitulate, from my point of view, Young
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people
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is
next
generation of parents, if there is a
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school
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who
build great base then earth will be a have a great place to
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live
where there is less crime and
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well mannered
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people
will be living.
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IELTS essay Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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