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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. do ypu agree or disagree?

Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. do ypu agree or disagree? lBeW
A Tax is play a significant role in the growth of any country. Some people believes that they should not to pay tax from their income and save money from themselves. I am totally disagree with this opinion. There are many benefits to government as well as an individuals towards paying tax. Firstly, As Tax incomes help to country’s economy, its affects to an individuals life styles as well. With this income, government can full fill their basic needs in minimum rates. So people can easily survive with low budget income. Secondly, Persons will get more facilities such as transportation, electricity, hydro, water supply, etc. While some individuals think to save money by avoiding pay tax, they have their own benefits behind it.
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from their
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and save money from themselves. I am
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life styles
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. With this
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,
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can full fill their basic needs in minimum rates.
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IELTS essay Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. do ypu agree or disagree?

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