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some people think it is not essential for everyone to learn english do you agree or not

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Ideas are divided on whether absorbing English is a need for everyone or not. it seems to me that people who hold the view that learning English is not essential are mistaken. Firstly, English is the official language in more than 50 countries, mostly well-developed nations which may be a reasonable goal for settling down in the future. Since English speaking countries are considered as the best destinations for education, one must have well dominance over the language to thrive in an English-speaking country. Besides, this skill is fundamental in the age of globalization. Good knowledge of English is also required to make the best use of information available on the Internet since most of the useful resources when researching are in English. To conclude, learning English is a necessity considering the important profits it offers in today’s world.

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IELTS essay some people think it is not essential for everyone to learn english do you agree or not

Essay

American English

4 paragraphs

139 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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