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some people believe that studying online is more effective than studying on campus while others disagree

some people believe that studying online is more effective than studying on campus while others disagree RN0eP

Studying online is more effective than studying on campus. Students no need to leave there houses and they can choose there flexiable time to study, depends on there daily routine works. They can also record those classes so that they can rewind them back and watch again and again. For example, while they are doing any part time jobs, it will be more convenient to study online. So, studying online will save there personal time and help them to do any other stuff.

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leave
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houses and
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 time to study, depends on Did you mean "their"?their
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 daily routine works. They can also
 record those classes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 that they can rewind them back and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 again and again. For example
, while they are doing any This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 jobs, it will be more convenient to study online. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 them to do any other stuff. 

IELTS essay some people believe that studying online is more effective than studying on campus while others disagree

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American English

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83 words

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