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SOME PEOPLE THINK CERTAIN PRISONERS SHOULD BE MADE TO BE UNPAID COMMUNITY WORK MATERIAL OF BEING PUT BEHIND BARS.

SOME PEOPLE THINK CERTAIN PRISONERS SHOULD BE MADE TO BE UNPAID COMMUNITY WORK MATERIAL OF BEING PUT BEHIND BARS. 7a3e3

Certain demographics of society believe that prisoners should be used for appropriate cause. The punishment should be in such a way where criminals are made to serve society rather than being in prison. This essay will argue why this theory is not applicable in all cases. Few populate anticipate that the person who has commited on me, should provide less services to the society. They have reason to believe that by doing so the person will be deprived of not only time but also the liberty of freedom. For an instance, the one who commits an offense against the law is being sentenced to serve the community for 500 hours. Hence they will loose time and will gain profit out of it. In addition to that as they have to abide by the law, they cannot enjoy power of choice. They just have to deliver their services to society. Consequently offenders will be rehabilitated and integrated back into society. This will benefit young people who followed wrong path. On the other hand, in certain community unpaid public services is considered as the most lenient form of penalty. They aver that the lawbreakers cause to the society are liability instead of asset. Moreover, the penalty should be imposed in accordance with the crime commited. For an instance if the homicide in the prison. Those criminal are neither merciful nor capable of delivering services to community. They will always bring distraction. As a result. , malefactor are to be kept in detention. To recapitulate, the essay discussed two sides of a coin; whether keeping criminals behind bars is the option or they should be

Certain demographics of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanyhumanitycommunitynationculturecivilization
society
 believe that prisoners should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for appropriate cause. The punishment should be in such a way where criminals are made
 to serve You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanyhumanitycommunitynationculturecivilization
society
rather
 than being in prison. This essay will argue why this theory is not applicable in all cases.

Few populate anticipate that the person who has Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "committed", the past tense form of the verb 'commit'?committedcommuted
commited
 on me, should provide Did you mean "fewer"? The noun services is countable.fewer
less
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services
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanyhumanitycommunitynationculturecivilization
society
. They have reason to believe that by doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the person will be deprived
 of not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 the liberty of freedom. For an instance, the one who commits an offense against the law is being sentenced
 to serve the community for 500 hours. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 they will Did you mean "lose" (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?lose
loose
 time and will gain profit out of it. In addition
 to that as they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 abide by the law, they cannot enjoy power of choice. They This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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have to
 deliver their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanyhumanitycommunitynationculturecivilization
society
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Consequently,
Consequently
 offenders will be rehabilitated
 and integrated back into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanyhumanitycommunitynationculturecivilization
society
. This will benefit young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who followed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 path.

On the other hand
, in certain community unpaid public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
is considered
 as the most lenient form of penalty. They aver that the lawbreakers cause to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanyhumanitycommunitynationculturecivilization
society
 are liability instead
 of asset. Moreover
, the penalty should be imposed
 in accordance with the crime Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "committed", the past tense form of the verb 'commit'?committedcommuted
commited
. For an instance if the homicide in the prison. Those criminal are neither merciful nor capable of delivering You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 to community. They will always bring distraction. As a result
. Loose punctuation mark.apply
,
 malefactor are to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in detention.

To recapitulate, the essay discussed two sides of a coin; whether keeping criminals behind bars is the Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).option, or
option or
 they should be