In this generaton, music has bemcome quite eminent among adolescents, however, It seems like most of them put all their eggs in one basket by spending money on one thing: music.
First, there are plenty of applications could be downloaded to listen to any types of song.
It is not necessary to purchase an album of a certain idol, if it can be installed free on the mobile.
Second, one can sing karaoke with friends instead of going to a concert and waking up the next day having a headache. Moreover, it is quite noisy in the concert as a result of many fans. Alas, it is more expensive than the karaoke.
Third, most of these celebrity do not care about their fans. They have a private life, identity, and personality. Subsequently music is a profession to them and they earn money from it while their fans keep on bankrupting by spending on it. Later on, they will not be able to pay for their university wages, leading them to have a part-time job.
Fourth, as there are a lot of consequences, misleadng career choice. For example, a fan who idolizes a certain artist maybe striving to meet him or her. Occasionally, that fan would waste money on music classes because they desire to be like their artists. Instead of doing that, focusing on acheiving profession is mandatory for self-fulfillment.
Finally, I would say that music is the key to our emotions including: sadness, happiness, stress, relief, and anger. In spite of that it should not be used as a material to buy. 
In this  
generaton
,  
music
 has  
bemcome
 quite eminent among adolescents,  
however
, It seems like most of them put all their eggs in one basket by spending money on one thing: music. 
First
, there are  
plenty
 of applications could  
be downloaded
 to listen to any types of song.
It is not necessary to  
purchase
 an album of a certain idol, if it can  
be installed
 free on the mobile.
Second, one can sing karaoke with friends  
instead
 of going to a concert and waking up the  
next
 day having a headache.  
Moreover
, it is quite noisy in the concert  
as a result
 of  
many
 fans. Alas, it is more expensive than the karaoke.
Third, most of  
these celebrity
 do not care about their fans. They have a private life, identity, and personality.  
Subsequently
  music
 is a profession to  
them and
 they earn money from it while their fans  
keep
 on bankrupting by spending on it. Later on, they will not be able to pay for their university wages, leading them to have a part-time job.
Fourth, as there are  
a lot of
 consequences,  
misleadng
 career choice.  
For example
, a fan who idolizes a certain artist maybe striving to  
meet
 him or her.  
Occasionally
, that fan would waste money on  
music
 classes  
because
 they desire to be like their artists.  
Instead
 of doing that, focusing on  
acheiving
 profession is mandatory for self-fulfillment. 
Finally
, I would say that  
music
 is the key to our emotions including: sadness, happiness,  
stress
, relief, and anger.  
In spite of
 that it should not be  
used
 as a material to  
buy
.