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Some people sleep in a dark and quiet room. Other people sleep with a small light on and don’t mind noise. How do you like to sleep? Explain your answer.

Some people sleep in a dark and quiet room. Other people sleep with a small light on and don’t mind noise. How do you like to sleep? Explain your answer. lwpW
A number of people lean towards sleep in tranquil and unilluminated bedroom, the remainder prefer a room which has faint light and some muffled hum. I choose to sleep in a room which is not illuminated and has calming murmurs. There are two reasons for me to sleep in a bedroom which is not having light and has some pleasing noise. Firstly the dark room makes the atmosphere less intense and secondly the calming noise gives a peaceful ambience. Both of which contribute to a peaceful and relaxing sleep.
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IELTS essay Some people sleep in a dark and quiet room. Other people sleep with a small light on and don’t mind noise. How do you like to sleep? Explain your answer.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
89 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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