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Peer-to-peer file sharing software enables computers to connect and exchange data over a decentralized network. This software has allowed for the sharing of music, video, and random files without payment. Users rationalized the lack of monetary exchange b

Peer-to-peer file sharing software enables computers to connect and exchange data over a decentralized network. This software has allowed for the sharing of music, video, and random files without payment. Users rationalized the lack of monetary exchange b 85GNB

The professor discusses the disadvantages of peer-to-peer sharing software and the reasons it comes under attack. The information she presents contradicts facts outlined in the reading passage. Firstly, the professor indicates that has suffered significantly from this software. She clarifies that there are around one billion illegal donwloads monthly and annual losses in range of $4. 3 billion. However, the reading says that music sales have been increased with the recent rise in peer-to-peer sharing software. The passage also provides two studies indicating people purchase more songs rather than illegal downloading. Secondly, the professor asserts that sharing songs between computers using these servers is against the copyright legislation. The professor provides an example of a peer-to-peer server, which was shut down because of illegal sharing of files, as an evidence to support this. The professor refutes the users’ assertion about ‘fair use’ clause. According to this clause, users are allowed to lend purchased CDs to their friends, not sharing them with strangers over the internet. However, the article posits that this type of copying is not a violation of copyright law. Thirdly, the professor rejects the fact that peer-to-peer software aids the artists to gain popularity. The lecturer cites a study showing that a few number of downloads were from newborn artists. All in all, the unknown artists failed to gain popularity or success. On the other hand, the reading cites that peer-to-peer software can benefit unknown artists in a variety of ways.

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