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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign countries. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign countries. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. PKnJ
Nowadays foreign language is the most powerful thing which is assist to the people communicating with others; however, l feel that learning language is very important in the life. Firstly, in this period, there are many languages in the such as french, english and so one so that humans ought to study more. However, it depends on individuals study because if they have not impul for learning nobody could assist them.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign countries. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

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