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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language

some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language NEJb
Now a days, learning different language's has become very easy. One of the primary reason behind it is internet where one can learn to speak some new language within a month. Such easy access and resouces available provoke's people to learn a new language apart from their native one. One of major reason behind this is people from different parts of the world are willing to go to abroad for enhancement of their career. The very basic requirement for the same is that one need's to learn the language spoken in that country otherwise it can act as a barrier. If an individual has already learnt before going in that country then he/she may experience a different level of confidence as you know the language spoken over there. Failure to which may lead to a sense of inferiority and may lead to several issues. This may also aid if a person decides to visit some other nation for travelling purpose, for example France and knows how to speak french, then that person may ask for help to any local resident since they know to speak the local language. This is not the only reason. Various multinational companies offers suitable job if the applicant possesses that he/she is able to speak the language of the country where the company is originated from. One can also act as a freelancer by providing online services such as teaching that language or translate a comprehension in that language and earn some decent living. For example, there are several websites which pay your on the baisi of number of words that you have translated. Therefore, one should always try to learn some additional language as it has several benefits apart from professional or educational purposes in my opinion.
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easy. One of the primary reason behind it is internet where one can
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learn
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speak
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some
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language
within a month. Such easy access and
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resouces
available
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apart from their native one.

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different
parts of the world are willing to
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for enhancement of their career. The
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very
basic requirement for the same is that one need's to
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learn
the
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language
spoken in that country
otherwise
it can act as a barrier. If an individual has already
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learnt
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before
going in that country then he/she may experience a
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different
level of confidence as you know the
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language
spoken over there. Failure to which may lead to a sense of inferiority and may lead to several issues. This may
also
aid if a person decides to visit
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some
other nation for travelling purpose,
for example
France and knows how to
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speak
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french
, then that person may
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ask for
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to any local resident since they know to
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speak
the local language.

This is not the
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only
reason. Various multinational
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companies
offers suitable job if the applicant possesses that he/she is able to
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speak
the
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language
of the country where the
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company
is originated
from. One can
also
act as a freelancer by providing online services such as teaching that
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language
or translate a comprehension in that
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language
and earn
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some
decent living.
For example
, there are several websites which pay your on the
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baisi
of number of words that you have translated.

Therefore
, one should always try to
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learn
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some
additional
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language
as it has several benefits apart from professional or educational purposes in my opinion.
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IELTS essay some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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