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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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Since the advent of the Industrial Age in the nineteenth century, humankind has been placing tremendous pressure on the environment. This irresponsible behaviour has had a disastrous effect on the biodiversity of the plant and animal kingdoms. Some people say that. . . Since the advent of the Industrial Age in the nineteenth century, humankind has been placing tremendous pressure on the environment, through consumption of resources, pollution of land, air and water, and destruction of natural habitats. This irresponsible behaviour has had a disastrous effect on the biodiversity of the plant and animal kingdoms. Some people say that. . . Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Music in all of its wonderful forms has been woven into the fabric of human society for millenia. In human society there are things that bring us together and there are things that drive us apart. Two potential examples of the latter are cultural differences and the generation gap. Many people say that music Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why is this the case. What disadvantages can you think of? In the past, only a very small proportion of people were able to work for themselves. However, in modern society, more and more people are deciding against the traditional route of employment and working independently.
Since the advent of the Industrial Age in the nineteenth century, humankind has been placing tremendous pressure on the environment. This irresponsible
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has had a disastrous effect on the biodiversity of the plant and animal kingdoms.
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Since the advent of the Industrial Age in the nineteenth century, humankind has been placing tremendous pressure on the environment, through consumption of resources, pollution of land, air and water, and destruction of natural habitats. This irresponsible
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
has had a disastrous effect on the biodiversity of the plant and animal kingdoms.
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Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
say that.
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.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.


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Some
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people
say that music is a
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good
way of bringing
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people
of
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different
cultures and ages together. To what extent do you
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agree
or disagree with this opinion?

Music in all of its wonderful forms has
been woven
into the fabric of human society for
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millenia
.

In human society there are things that bring us together and there are things that drive us apart. Two potential examples of the latter are cultural differences and the generation gap.
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Many
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people
say that
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music


Nowadays
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many
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people
choose to be self-employed,
rather
than to work for a
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company
or
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organisation
. Why is this the case. What disadvantages can you
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think
of?

In the past,
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small
proportion of
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people
were able to work for themselves.
However
, in modern society, more and more
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people
are deciding against the traditional route of employment and working
independently
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IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
246 words
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