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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. doqYd
Global Warming is a significant factor for environmental problem because of these many plants and animals are destroyed. And other People think environment Problems are huge. So, both the cipproaches have their own. merits and demerits. Firstly, I will talk about environmental problems. Now days, nouschigilization is big factor for envilonment because any industry buld they take some place thus deforestation are happened. Also, in Cities pollution is increase day to day because of these global warming will effect rise and impact on environment. India as developing Country to those big hods are needed also many industry, house and so on is build land is required for land government Should Cut thes. These types of gigi tivity are disated for envionment. so Secondly i will talk about due to environmental Problem effect on particulars species of plants and animals. Day to day forest care decrease so for animals these is the huge issue. ALSO impact plants. Because animals and plans are more require for environment. After three to four months famous amazon forest are born because of these mant animals deths occouled also number of plants are burn. Therefore, we lose particular species of plants and animal due problem. to environmental Goverment make policy and glare to people for save In addition the environment reduced utilize of to decrease pollution and Some people try Plastic material. . To conclude, some people say we lose plants and animals and other say we focus on only environmental Problems However my opinion is we focus on both the issue. Like thy to aware people and teach how to save environment. Also, government will be arrange some campaign for environment. Because we save the environment for our life and also for animals.
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environmental
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problem
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because
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many
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plants
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animals
are
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destroyed
. And other
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People
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think
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environment
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are huge.
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So
, both the
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cipproaches
have their
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own
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merits
and demerits.
Firstly
, I will talk about
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environmental
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problems
.
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Now
days,
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nouschigilization
is
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big
factor for
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envilonment
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because
any industry
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buld
they take
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some
place
thus
deforestation
are happened
.
Also
, in Cities pollution is increase day to day
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because
of these global warming will
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effect
rise and impact on
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environment
. India as
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developing Country
to those
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big
hods
are needed
also
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many industry
,
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house
and
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so
on is build land
is required
for land
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government
Should
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Cut
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thes
. These types of
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gigi
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tivity
are
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disated
for
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envionment
.
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so
Secondly
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i
will talk about due to
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environmental
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Problem
effect on
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particulars
species of
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plants
and
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animals
. Day to day forest care decrease
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so
for
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animals
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these is
the huge issue.
ALSO
impact
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plants
.
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Because
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animals
and plans are more require for
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environment
.
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three to four months
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famous
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amazon
forest
are born
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because
of these
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mant
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animals
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deths
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occouled
also
number of
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plants
are burn.
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, we lose particular species of
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plants
and
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animal
due
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problem
.
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to
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environmental
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Goverment
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make
policy and glare to
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people
for save
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the
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environment
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reduced
utilize of to decrease pollution and
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Some
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people
try Plastic material.
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To conclude
,
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some
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people
say we lose
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plants
and
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animals
and other say we focus on
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only
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environmental
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Problems
However
my opinion is we focus on both the issue. Like thy to aware
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people
and teach how to save
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environment
.
Also
,
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government
will be
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arrange
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some
campaign for
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environment
.
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Because
we save the
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environment
for our life and
also
for
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animals
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.

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  American English
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