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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. KOrk
In the modern days the environmental issues are the most disputing theme across the globe because it affects to all parts of our life whenever we live. Some people believes that the main environmental issue is vanishing of some significant plants and animals from our planet whereas some people say that we have to handle more important environmental problems. In this essay I will try to discuss both opinions and give my personal statement about what are the most important environmental issues on our planet. Losing some particular species of animals and plants, of course, is important for ecology of our planet. I can understand that point of view because of vanishing some indispensable types of animals and plants could affect the food chain in some regions in the world. For example, if some insects are disappeared from our planet, some animals couldn’t be able to find a source of food. We have to say that the loss of particular species of plants and animals is a consequence of environmental issues across the globe. Humanity should take care of the environment because the disappearing some types of animals and trees are happening in our modernity. More and more politicians and activists say that our planet will be heated by the end of the century, and it will change conditions for the majority of species of mammals, plants and fish. For example, industry of services makes more and more pollution in majority of nations, which is consequence of ecology. I believe that the more important problems of the environment are pollutions that have been produced by companies and people’s activity. Moreover, a lot of people don’t understand that eco-friendly policy (also some rules) making our environment cleaner for ourselves even for plants and animals. For example, the Paris agreement of 2018 was signed by the most powerful leaders of the world, and they promised to reduce pollution by half In 2100, however, people still don’t follow eco-friendly rules. All in all, it destroys our planet faster than in previous centuries. In conclusion, the losing some species of animals and plants are consequences of modern ecology policy, and we still have more problems that must be handled.
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is vanishing of
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animals
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say that we
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handle more
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important
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problems. In this essay I will try to discuss both opinions and give my personal statement about what are the most
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important
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environmental
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issues
on our planet.

Losing
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some
particular species of
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animals
and
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plants
,
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important
for ecology of our
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. I can understand that point of view
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because
of vanishing
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indispensable types of
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animals
and
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plants
could affect the food chain in
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some
regions in the world.
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, if
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insects
are disappeared
from our
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planet
,
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some
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animals
couldn’t be able to find a source of food. We
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have to
say that the loss of particular species of
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plants
and
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animals
is a consequence of
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environmental
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issues
across the globe.

Humanity should take care of the environment
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because
the disappearing
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some
types of
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animals
and trees are happening in our modernity. More and more politicians and activists say that our
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planet
will
be heated
by the
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end
of the century, and it will
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change
conditions for the majority of species of mammals,
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plants
and fish.
For example
, industry of services
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makes
more and more pollution in
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majority of
nations, which is consequence of ecology.

I believe that the more
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important
problems of the environment are pollutions that have
been produced
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companies
and
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people’s
activity.
Moreover
,
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a lot of
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people
don’t understand that eco-friendly policy (
also
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some
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rules
) making our environment cleaner for ourselves even for
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plants
and
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animals
.
For example
, the Paris agreement of 2018
was signed
by the most powerful leaders of the world, and they promised to
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reduce
pollution by half In 2100,
however
,
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people
still
don’t follow eco-friendly
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rules
. All in all, it
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destroys
our
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planet
faster than in previous centuries.

In conclusion
, the losing
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some
species of
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animals
and
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plants
are consequences of modern ecology policy, and we
still
have more problems that
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must
be handled
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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