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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, environmental issues are on increase and there are plethora of things that place a hazardous impact on the environment. Some people say that in this era, extinction of particular species of plants and animals is our major environmental concern where other argues that there are other important problems that need to be addressed. Overall, in this essay, we will discuss both the views and give our opinion.
Nowadays, environmental issues are on increase and there are plethora of things that place a hazardous impact on the environment.
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say that in this era, extinction of particular species of plants and animals is our major environmental concern where other argues that there are other
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Overall
, in this essay, we will discuss both the views and give our opinion.

IELTS essay some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. other say that there are more important environmental problems.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
68 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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