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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Bad situation and unexpected problems comes to everyone. Well, there are two possible outcomes to this first you end up losing all hope and give up or else you stand against all odds and overcome it and get motivated. Also, acceptance to a bad problem is important but one should always try to improve it. This essay will discuss both the views before reaching a reasonable conclusion. To commence with, imagine a person falling short on money or having an unsatisfactory job and accepts the scenario which ultimately does not work out well leading to a sad and unmotivated life. This attitude makes a person lethargic and considering to give up comes to their mind as a best choice to any situation. On the contrary, motivated people would put all their efforts and try to improve in any worsen situation. Even though that might not guarantee success but at least they tried their best. Life is a cycle and it puts various situation to test, one who stands still and fight all these problems is the ultimate warrior. It is easy to distinguish these two type of people. One who accepts the situation and does not move on they bend their knees to every unexpected phase and curse their luck. On the other end, people who have courage to withstand any type of crisis luck goes hand to hand with them. Exploring various ways to failure, dealing with it and improving continuously are the three steps to be successful in life. It is easy to give up and lose but it takes guts to stand up and give it a go. On a closure scrutiny, some people have a mind frame to accept an unexpected or bad situation and do nothing good about it but I, personally believe that the phase, weather it is bad or worse will eventually pass and improving yourself will ultimately make the situation favorable and end up overcoming it.
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motivated.
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one should always try to
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reaching a reasonable conclusion.

To commence with, imagine a person falling short on money or having an unsatisfactory job and accepts the scenario which
ultimately
does not work out well leading to a sad and unmotivated life. This attitude
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makes
a person lethargic and considering to
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give
up
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comes
to their mind as
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a
best choice to any situation.

On the contrary
, motivated
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would put all their efforts and try to
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improve
in any worsen
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situation
.
Even though
that might not guarantee success
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but
at least they tried their best. Life is a
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cycle and
it puts various
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situation
to
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, one who stands
still
and fight all these problems is the ultimate warrior.

It is easy to distinguish these two type of
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people
. One who accepts the
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situation
and does not
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move
on they bend their knees to every unexpected phase and curse their luck. On the other
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end
,
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people
who have courage to withstand any type of crisis luck goes hand to hand with them. Exploring various ways to failure, dealing with it and improving
continuously
are the three steps to be successful in life. It is easy to
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give
up and lose
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but
it takes guts to stand up and
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give
it a go.

On a closure scrutiny,
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some
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people
have a mind frame to accept an unexpected or
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bad
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situation
and do nothing
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good
about it
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but
I,
personally
believe that the phase, weather it is
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or worse will
eventually
pass and improving yourself will
ultimately
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make
the
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favorable and
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up overcoming it.
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IELTS essay some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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