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some people say that school years are the best years in their lives. Do you agree or disagree with given statement?

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The role of school to nourish childern with overall development is exceptional. Presently, it has been extremely debatable whether school years are excellent years where one can develop skills to make life prosperous and have fun and frolic with friends than other periods of life or not. Here, I would like to accord with given statement firmly. There are multifarious points to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, school plays a terrific role to make children creative, competitive, goal oriented and skillful. For example, students learns to create new ideas and will power to achiev. . .
The role of school to nourish
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childern
with
overall
development is exceptional.
Presently
, it has been
extremely
debatable whether school years are excellent
It is better to use 'years' with the time-relative pronoun 'when': "years when". (Alternatively, use 'in/on which')
years where
one can develop
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skills
to
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make
life prosperous and have fun and frolic with friends than other periods of life or not. Here, I would like to accord with
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given
statement
firmly
.

There are multifarious points to shore up my point of view.
First
and foremost, school plays a terrific role to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
children creative, competitive, goal oriented and skillful.
For example
, students learns to create new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and will power to
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achiev
.
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IELTS essay some people say that school years are the best years in their lives.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
100 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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