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Some people say that population is main reason of pollution what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that population is main reason of pollution what extend RDJV
Pollution is common problem of world but certain group of people believe that growth in generation is main consequence of increasing pollution. I, however, reckon that this is not main reason of pollution. This essay will explicate reasons of this in following paragraphs. Generally, there are three main pollution in the world. Frist of all, air pollution which is rise up through the transport, factories and
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of all, air
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IELTS essay Some people say that population is main reason of pollution what extend

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
65 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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