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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. aMKm
In this ultramodern society, shopping become ease day by day with the advancement of technology. Some group of people believe that its really made easy to shop, while other section of people oppose this. I believe technology has made large impact on shopping methods and made them simple as much as possible. There are several reason behind the shopping become easy now a days. Firstly, with the advancement of internet technology, online shopping platform become easy accessible from anywhere across the globe. Anyone could easily access their computer, laptop or mobile for shopping which are available anytime. Ecommerce Company had made possible online shopping platform very user friendly. Secondly, there are ample option available within your search, that makes shopping each and interesting with different variety full selection are available. Finally, number of choice available to make payment during online system such as Cash on delivery, EMI, Discount coupon which add fun in shopping. Conversely, other people do not believe that shopping made easy by the modern technology. There are some reason behind this, easy accessibility make people materialistic approach, which lead to shopaholic society and consequently people made debt full by easy EMI options. So many options available during shopping which makes confused to buyers what to buy? There are also un-assured on quality of product, there are no any specific assurance to help buyers during shopping. For instance, when you made shopping of cloth online, sometimes its quality and color not up to the mark as describe on website. Therefore, frauding and cheating cashes increased. In conclusion, I believe that latest technology has indeed added benefit in shopping, while we ignore few minor drawback which we could resolve by act as judiciously.
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become
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ease
day by day with the advancement of
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technology
.
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Some
group of
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people
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believe
that its
really
made
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easy
to shop, while other section of
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people
oppose this. I
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believe
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technology
has made large impact on
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shopping
methods and made them simple as much as possible.

There are several reason behind the
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shopping
become
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easy
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now a days
.
Firstly
, with the advancement of internet
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technology
,
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online
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shopping
platform become
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easy
accessible from anywhere across the globe. Anyone could
easily
access their computer, laptop or mobile for
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shopping
which are
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available
anytime.
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Ecommerce
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Company
had made possible
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online
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shopping
platform
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very
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user friendly
.
Secondly
, there are ample option
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available
within your search, that
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makes
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shopping
each and interesting with
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different
variety full selection are
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available
.
Finally
, number of choice
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available
to
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make
payment during
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online
system such as Cash on delivery, EMI, Discount coupon which
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add
fun in shopping.

Conversely
, other
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people
do not
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believe
that
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shopping
made
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easy
by the modern
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technology
. There are
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some
reason behind this,
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easy
accessibility
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make
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people
materialistic approach, which lead to shopaholic society and
consequently
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people
made debt full by
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easy
EMI options.
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So
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many
options
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available
during
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shopping
which
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makes
confused to buyers what to
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buy
? There are
also
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un-assured
on quality of product, there are
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no
any specific assurance to
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help
buyers during
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shopping
.
For instance
, when you made
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shopping
of cloth
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online
,
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sometimes
its quality and color not up to the mark as
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describe
on website.
Therefore
,
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frauding
and cheating cashes increased.

In conclusion
, I
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believe
that latest
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technology
has
indeed
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added
benefit in
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shopping
, while we
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ignore
few minor drawback which we could resolve by act as
judiciously
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
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