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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Modern technology is the best mode of interacting with both sellers and consumers. Gadgets with the help of internet aids convenience to everyone which includes internet shopping that has a lot of benefits to all the consumers and sellers. Hassle free shopping and convenience is what everyone aiming for. It is undeniable true that shopping makes our life easier with help of modern technology for so many reasons. Firstly, consumers can easily search their preferred item rather than going to the mall to purchase one. Secondly, they can determine the difference between each item and compare it online with other sellers. Lastly, safety is important nowadays specially in this time of pandemic since buyers can simply click and check the item they need without any risk of getting infected by shoppers. On the contrary, online shopping can also have its disadvantages. Consumers might get scammed by sellers who might not give the same product the consumers wants. Nowadays, modern technology can also be used by scammers to steal their information details including personal information which may lead to identity theft. Another disadvantage is consumers might purchase items that doesn't have a good quality because it was not tested first and it hard to return and ask for a refund from the seller. Therefore, I can say that without the help of modern technology, people might get purchase what they usually get from a particular place without having a variety of products to choose with. It inhibits the minds of a person to have a broad information for a particular item to choose.
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is the best mode of interacting with both
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sellers
and
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consumers
. Gadgets with the
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of internet aids convenience to everyone which includes internet
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that has
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a lot of
benefits to all the
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consumers
and
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sellers
.
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Hassle free
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shopping
and convenience is what everyone
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aiming
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shopping
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makes
our life easier with
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technology
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,
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consumers
can
easily
search their preferred
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item
rather
than going to the mall to
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purchase
one.
Secondly
, they can determine the difference between each
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item
and compare it online with other
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sellers
.
Lastly
, safety is
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important
nowadays
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in this time of pandemic since buyers can
simply
click and
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the
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item
they need without any
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risk
of getting infected by shoppers.

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, online
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can
also
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Consumers
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scammed by
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sellers
who
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not give the same product the
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consumers
wants. Nowadays,
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modern
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technology
can
also
be
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used
by scammers to steal their information
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details
including personal information which may lead to identity theft. Another disadvantage is
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consumers
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purchase
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items
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good
quality
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because
it was not
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tested
first
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ask for
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, I can say that without the
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modern
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,
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people
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what they
usually
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get
from a particular place without having a variety of products to choose with. It inhibits the minds of a person to have a broad information for a particular
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item
to choose.
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IELTS essay Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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  American English
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