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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. BbWX
The world is nowadays getting smaller and faster. The reason is the evolution and development of modern science and technology. As the technology is expanding its innovations, the world is becoming very easy towards the people. From last few decades technology has developed a lot. Consequently, technology nowadays called modern technology. People’s life gets easier than before. There are so many advantages of modern technology that people are experiencing these days. Say for example, healthcare, banking system, shopping habit, education and so on. Among all these changes, shopping system and habit change is very noticeable. Previously, people used to go to shopping mall though they didn’t had much time however publics use to enjoy this shopping habit a lot. But when the modern technology arose people are getting dependent on technology. Because men can do their shopping through online, even they can choose, pay, change and most importantly having home delivery. Which resulting saving people’s time, money. Therefore, this time and money people can invest with their family and these things makes people’s family life more beautiful and happy. Because of this easy, happy and relaxed lifestyle almost half of the people of modern technology user admitting that up-to-date technology has prepared their life very cooler. Conversely, another bunch of people believe that modern technology might adorn the life calmer but not fully. According to them, this buying habit using technology led people to become lazier and dull and also sometime shopping online also creating opportunities for online scammers and cheaters. That is why this portion of publics disagree with this statement. To sum up, I think everything has a dark and light side. It just a matter of morale practice of this technologies in a gentle way. Yes, it is true that this habit is making people more homesickness however still it is possible to recover by using the time properly at outside.
The world is nowadays getting smaller and faster. The reason is the evolution and development of
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modern
science and
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technology
. As the
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technology
is expanding its innovations, the world is becoming
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very
easy towards the
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people
.

From last few
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decades
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technology
has developed a lot.
Consequently
,
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technology
nowadays called
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modern
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technology
.
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People’s
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life
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gets
easier than
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before
. There are
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so
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many
advantages of
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modern
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technology
that
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people
are experiencing these days. Say
for example
, healthcare, banking system,
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shopping
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habit
, education and
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so
on. Among all these
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changes
,
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shopping
system and
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habit
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change
is
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very
noticeable.

Previously,
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people
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used
to go to
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shopping
mall though they didn’t
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had
much
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time
however
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publics
Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".
use to
enjoy this
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shopping
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habit
a lot.
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But
when the
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modern
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technology
arose
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people
are getting dependent on
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technology
.
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Because
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men
can do their
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shopping
through online, even they can choose, pay,
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change
and most
importantly
having home delivery. Which resulting saving
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people’s
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time
, money.
Therefore
, this
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time
and money
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people
can invest with their family and these things
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makes
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people’s
family
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life
more
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beautiful
and happy.
Because of this
easy, happy and relaxed lifestyle almost half of the
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people
of
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modern
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technology
user admitting that up-to-date
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technology
has prepared their
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life
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very
cooler.

Conversely
, another bunch of
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people
believe that
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modern
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technology
might adorn the
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life
calmer
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but
not
fully
. According to them, this buying
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habit
using
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technology
led
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people
to become lazier and dull and
also
sometime
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shopping
online
also
creating opportunities for online scammers and cheaters.
That is
why this portion of
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publics
disagree with this statement.

To sum up, I
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think
everything has a dark and light side. It
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just
a matter of morale practice of
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this
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technologies
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in a gentle way
. Yes, it is true that this
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habit
is making
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people
more homesickness
however
still
it is possible to recover by using the
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time
properly
at outside.
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IELTS essay Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
314 words
5.5
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