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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Several people say that mordern technology has made shopping today easir and others person disagree with opinion. I have given below both side views and opinion Modern age day by day increasing discovery across the world. Also it is essy to communication one by one country. In addition, present age has been increased shopping and most of people spent more money in the shoping. Everyday update technology and country, that's why, it has made eassy to shopping for young generation and adults residents. In the time, day by day increasing online shop and others shop. Present time nobody need to go outside for buy anything, now it is possible by online order. It is reduce cash risk and also safe time for job worker. On the others hand, present age has many old person and uneducated person. They are think that it is not safe for them. They can not understand properly technology and not used to with technology. This type of people, they like to direct shopping because they believe that online shop must be cheat with them. Also, loss the money and time. In addition, several old person trying to understand about technology and how have benefit of online shopping. They are getting used to with technology and others invent. In conclusion, in my point of view, modern world they have stay contribution for technology and it is made to easy everything in the word. In the young generation, it is better for them. Also adults try to used to with them where is old person it is take some times for understand.
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say that
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mordern
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technology
has made
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shopping
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today
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easir
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and others
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person
disagree with opinion. I have
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given
below both side views and
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opinion


Modern age day by day increasing discovery across the world.
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Also
it is
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essy
to communication one by one country.
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, present age has
been increased
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shopping
and most of
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people
spent more money in the
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shoping
.

Everyday update
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technology
and country, that's why, it has made
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eassy
to
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shopping
for young generation and adults residents. In the
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time
, day by day increasing
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online
shop
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and others
shop. Present
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time
nobody need to go outside for
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buy
anything,
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now
it is possible by
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online
order. It is
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reduce
cash
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risk
and
also
safe
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time
for job worker.

On the others hand, present age has
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many
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old
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person
and uneducated
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person
. They are
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think
that it is not safe for them. They can not understand
properly
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technology
and not
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used
to with
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technology
. This type of
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people
, they like to direct
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shopping
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because
they believe that
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online
shop
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must
be
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cheat
with them.
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, loss the money and
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time
.
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, several
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old
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person
trying to understand about
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technology
and how have benefit of
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online
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shopping
. They are getting
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used
to with
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technology
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and others
invent.

In conclusion
, in my point of view, modern world they have stay contribution for
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technology and
it
is made
to easy everything in the word. In the young generation, it is better for them.
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Also
adults try to
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used
to with them where is
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old
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person
it is take
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times
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IELTS essay Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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  American English
5 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
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