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Schools have a limited amount of money to spend. Some people suggest that it should be spent on good teachers, while others say it should be used for buying equipment like computers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

School having very small budget, some people think that it should be given on eminent faculties others think that it should be spent on equipments like computers, projectors. Both the arguments have there own gravity, so thorough discussion is needed before making a logical conclusion. On the one hand, the former group think that good teachers are asset for the organization. Once they are hired they remains there and students can utilize them fully. Apart from teaching they monitor, motivate students and helps them to improve their extra curricular activities. On the other hand, when the budget is spent on buying equipments may cause degeneration over time. For example, as time goes, all electrical equipment may get crash due to some problems. to be precise, projectors may get damaged due to thunder and make it clear additional money is needed. moreover Equipments like computers should be upgraded periodically in order to work properly. However, a school to work properly both teachers and infrastructure are must. Both of them have equal priority, can't even separate one apart. After analysing both the views in detail, though the school budget is small both teachers and essential equipments are necessary for well being of a proper educationsystem.

School having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 budget, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that it should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 on eminent faculties others This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that it should be spent
 on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipments
 like computers, projectors. Both the arguments have there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 gravity, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 thorough discussion is needed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 making a logical conclusion.

On the one hand, the former group This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 teachers are asset for the organization. Once they are hired
 they The pronoun ‘they’ must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: “remain”remain
remains
 there and students can utilize them fully
. Apart from teaching they monitor, motivate students and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 them to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 their This word is normally spelled as one.extracurricular
extra curricular
 activities.

On the other hand
, when the budget is spent
 on buying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipments
 may cause degeneration over time. For example
, as time goes, all electrical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
 may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 crash due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problems. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.To
to
 be precise, projectors may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 damaged due to thunder and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 additional money is needed
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Moreover
moreover
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
Equipments
 like computers should be upgraded
periodically
 in order to work properly
.

However
, a school to work properly
 both teachers and infrastructure are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
. Both of them have equal priority, can't even separate one apart.

After Possible spelling mistake. ‘analysing’ is British English.analyzing
analysing
 both the views in detail, though the school budget is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 both teachers and essential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipments
 are necessary for This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.well-being
well being
 of a proper Possible spelling mistake found.education system
educationsystem
. 