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Happiness of a invidual depends upon

Plethora of people feel that the happiness depends on an individual, while on another hand many believes that happiness gets affected by different factors. Overall, happiness is all about how you feel about yourself, self-confidence and the situation you are going through. In my opinion happiness of a person can get affected by internal as well external factors. To begin with, Happiness is the state of min. For instance, numerous individual’s feel pleasure when they purchase something new or a thing which they dream about. Many people feel joyful visiting new places. It all differs from individual-to-individual, happiness is something which can be described by different individual in different ways.
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of a person can
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, numerous individual’s
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pleasure when they
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purchase
something new or a thing which they dream about.
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people
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joyful visiting new places. It all differs from individual-to-individual,
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IELTS essay Happiness of a invidual depends upon

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
110 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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