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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. MOwk
It is argued that how people dress does have a lot to tell about their tradition and personality. This essay disagrees with the saying and will point out two important factors in choosing clothes, which are climate and globalization, and prove that they are completely irrelevant to find out something about people’s character and culture. One of the most important factors that comes in mind while deciding how to dress is weather. Weather condition determines what fabrics should be used to make clothes, as well as what colours should be worn in a particular place. For example, Arabs who live in the Middle East and north Africa usually wear long white woolen dresses with two intentions. First, the white colour resists the heat more efficiently than any other colours. Second, wool is better than other fabrics at soaking up moisture from the skin and allowing it to evaporate from the outer surface. As you can see in this case their clothes could not reveal anything about their lifestyle or characteristics, and is chosen only to deal with the harsh wethear. The other element that plays a huge role in clothes choosing, these days, is globalizasion. This phenomenon influences everything and, what to wear is not an exception. A lot of inhabitants of this global village seem to have completely the same tastes in clothes as you can see the same brands and the same fashions in totally different areas with entirely different backgrounds. In the current stiff competition in fashion industry, local companies try their best to keep up with the latest fashions and tend to copy the patterns of their international counterparts in order to survive. This way people do not have a lot of alternatives and you see the same way of dressing worldwide, so you cannot be able to figure out some specific information about particular societies or their individuals’ habits through their choice of clothes. In conclusion, you cannot find out a lot about people’s characteristics and traditions via their clothes as some irrelevant factors like weather condition and globalization are directly deciding how we dress.
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is argued
that how
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people
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dress
does have a
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lot
to
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tell
about their tradition and personality. This essay disagrees with the saying and will point out two
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important
factors in choosing
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clothes
, which are climate and globalization, and prove that they are completely irrelevant to find out something about
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people’s
character and culture.

One of the most
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important
factors that
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comes
in mind while deciding how to
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dress
is weather. Weather condition determines what fabrics should be
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used
to
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make
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clothes
,
as well
as what
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colours
should
be worn
in a particular place.
For example
, Arabs who
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live
in the Middle East and
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north Africa
usually
wear long white woolen
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dresses
with two intentions.
First
, the white
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colour
resists the heat more
efficiently
than any other
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colours
. Second, wool is better than other fabrics at soaking up moisture from the skin and allowing it to evaporate from the outer surface. As you can
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see
in this case
their
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clothes
could not reveal anything about their lifestyle or characteristics, and
is chosen
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only
to deal with the harsh
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wethear
.

The other element that plays a huge role in
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clothes
choosing, these days, is
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globalizasion
. This phenomenon influences everything and, what to wear is not an exception. A
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lot
of inhabitants of this global village seem to have completely the same tastes in
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clothes
as you can
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see
the same brands and the same fashions in
totally
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different
areas with
entirely
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different
backgrounds. In the
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current
stiff competition in fashion industry, local
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companies
try their best to
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keep
up with the latest fashions and tend to copy the patterns of their international counterparts in order to survive. This way
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people
do not have a
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lot
of alternatives and you
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see
the same way of dressing worldwide,
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so
you cannot be able to figure out
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some
specific information about particular societies or their individuals’ habits through their choice of clothes.

In conclusion
, you cannot find out a
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lot
about
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people’s
characteristics and traditions via their
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clothes
as
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some
irrelevant factors like weather condition and globalization are
directly
deciding how we
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dress
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
350 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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