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some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the advance era it is believed by some individuals that it is not iportant to the youngsters related to handwriting skills. This essay agrees that it is necessary to teach students good skills of handwriting. There are two reasons; no attention on main study and bad impact on natural handwriting. The first main reason of why it is unnecessary to teach pupils new handwriting is no attention on main studies. Definitely, if a youngster will learn something despite his/her studies he will automatically get disracted and his grades will be affected. The same way if a student tries to improve his handwriting, he will not be able to focus on his academics. For example, once my best friend gave a try to get lectures on handwriting and eventually his gardes started to fall down. The second major reason is a bad impact on the natural handwriting skills. Definitely, Good has blessed everyone witha natural skill of handwriting. Every person in the world have a different way of writing but the students always try to improve their hndwriting because some people hate their style which causes a poor impact on the natural way of handwriting. For example, last month, I decided to make my writing style better but when i tried to do it I made my natural handwriting even worst. To sum up, the two main reason are bad impact on natural handwriting and no attention on main studies.
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is believed
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some
individuals that it is not iportant to the youngsters related to
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handwriting
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skills
. This essay
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agrees
that it is necessary to teach students
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good
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skills
of
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handwriting
. There are two
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reasons
; no attention on
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main
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study
and
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bad
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impact
on
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natural
handwriting.

The
first
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main
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reason
of why it is unnecessary to teach pupils new
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handwriting
is no attention on
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main
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studies
. Definitely, if a youngster will learn something despite his/her
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studies
he will
automatically
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get
disracted and his grades will be
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affected
. The same way if a student tries to
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improve
his
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handwriting
, he will not be able to focus on his academics.
For example
, once my best friend gave a try to
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get
lectures on
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handwriting
and
eventually
his gardes
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started
to fall down.

The second major
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reason
is a
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bad
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impact
on the
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natural
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handwriting
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skills
. Definitely,
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Good
has blessed everyone witha
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natural
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skill
of
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handwriting
. Every person in the world have a
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different
way of writing
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but
the students always try to
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improve
their hndwriting
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because
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some
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people
hate their style which causes a poor
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impact
on the
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natural
way of
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handwriting
.
For example
, last month, I decided to
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make
my writing style better
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but
when i tried to do it I made my
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natural
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handwriting
even worst.

To sum up, the two
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main
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reason
are
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bad
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impact
on
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natural
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handwriting
and no attention on
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main
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studies
.
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IELTS essay some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting.

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  American English
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