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Describe a long walk that you enjoyed.

Last summer, I went to a beach with my family. It took three hours drive from where I lived. When I arrived the beach area, I was thrilled by the amazing scenery of the sea. I had the priviledged to witness the beauty of a sunrise. The sun was glaring and the sea breeze was cooling. When I was walking along the beach, there were already so many people walking their dogs, jogging and there are a few people who were just sitting on the beach. While I was walking with my family, I suddenly observed a flock of birds in the sky. They were flying in a triangle shape. There was only one bird that led the whole flock of birds at that time. As I continued strolling along the beach, suddenly I saw the bird that was leading the rest of them, began to reposition itself and let other bird to take its turn to lead. It was amazing! I thought even the birds knew how to work in unity. That' s the reason why I enjoyed my walked in the nature. The nature was fascinating and it always has a suprised for me and taught me with a new lesson too.

Last summer, I went to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 with my family.

It took three hours drive from where I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
. When I arrived the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 area, I was thrilled
 by the amazing scenery of the sea. I had the priviledged to witness the beauty of a sunrise. The sun was glaring and the sea breeze was cooling.

When I was walking along the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
, there were already This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 walking their dogs, jogging and there are a few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 sitting on the beach.

While I was walking with my family, I suddenly
 observed a flock of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
birds
 in the sky. They were flying in a triangle shape. There was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
bird
 that led the whole flock of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
birds
 at that time. As I continued strolling along the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
, suddenly
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
bird
 that was leading the rest of them, began to reposition itself and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
bird
 to take its turn to lead.

It was amazing! I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 even the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
birds
 knew how to work in unity. That' s the reason why I enjoyed my walked in the nature. The nature was fascinating and it always has a suprised for me and taught me with a new lesson too. 