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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that practical exposure is as important as theoretical knowledge. A number of people think that much time is devoted to teaching the facts instead of focusing on hands-on experience in all phases of learning, whether it is school or college. I completely agree with the statement and in this essay I will support my view with valid arguments and examples. Most of the institutes follow conventional method of teaching which includes reading, learning and writing. By this method, children can only recall concepts for a limited amount of time and when it is time to apply that knowledge at work they have forgotten it. Consequently, many students who have degrees in physics or electronics cannot even change bulbs. Likewise, many MBAs cannot fill out a tax form. All of these point to the shortcomings of a system of learning that focuses only on theory. Another example of this is that the current curriculum does not have an equal number of theory and practical classes. To illustrate, while I had one lecture each day on the theoretical aspects of computers), there was only 1 laboratory session in the whole week. Due to this improper division, I could not practice everything being taught and hence lacked proper understanding of the concepts. If we had equal proportion of theory and practical classes, I would have gained better skills and confidence. A recent study by the educational department of New Delhi has shown that youngsters who were shown experiments were able to memorize and retain the information for a longer period of time then the ones who read it. To conclude, I agree with the argument that much time is being spent on cramming instead of experimental learning because of the current structure of teaching. Unfortunately, this overemphasis on theory prevents / stops students from acquiring real world skills. y education. Let me share my experience with you! Just like you even I was interested in journalism and after my high school enrolled in a university. To be honest, even though I took admission in a top-notch college, I was not satisfied with the quality of knowledge gained as they focused more on theoretical subjects instead of practical experience. Landing yourself a job is the best feeling as you start earning and become independent. Moreover, as far as learnings are concerned, I am sure you would not regret taking a job. The exposure and experience one gets while working is incomparable. Besides that, interacting with professionals is the best way to enhance your skills. Considering your skill-set, I would recommend you to try your luck in the publications. The profiles offered there are enticing, even if not highly paid. Apart from that, news channels are a good choice to start with if money is your motive. Last but not the least, there is a opening in my organization, i’ll share the description, if you like forward me your resume. In case you have any doubt, feel free to contact me. Your friend, Ira
There is no doubt that
practical
exposure is as
important
as theoretical knowledge. A number of
people
think
that much
time
is devoted
to teaching the facts
instead
of focusing on hands-on experience in all phases of
learning
, whether it is school or college. I completely
agree
with the statement and in this essay I will support my view with valid arguments and examples.

Most of the institutes follow conventional method of teaching which includes reading,
learning
and writing. By this method, children can
only
recall concepts for a limited amount of
time
and when it is
time
to apply that knowledge at work they have forgotten it.
Consequently
,
many
students who have degrees in physics or electronics cannot even
change
bulbs.
Likewise
,
many
MBAs
cannot fill out a tax form. All of these point to the shortcomings of a system of
learning
that focuses
only
on theory.

Another example of this is that the
current
curriculum does not have an equal number of theory and
practical
classes. To illustrate, while I had one lecture each day on the theoretical aspects of computers
)
, there was
only
1 laboratory session in the whole week. Due to this improper division, I could not practice everything
being taught
and
hence
lacked proper understanding of the concepts. If we had equal proportion of theory and
practical
classes, I would have gained better
skills
and confidence. A recent study by the educational department of New Delhi has shown that youngsters who
were shown
experiments were able to memorize and retain the information for a longer period of
time
then the ones who read it.

To conclude
, I
agree
with the argument that much
time
is
being spent
on cramming
instead
of experimental
learning
because
of the
current
structure of teaching. Unfortunately, this overemphasis on theory
prevents
/
stops
students from acquiring real world
skills
.
y
education.

Let
me share my experience with you!
Just
like you even I
was interested
in journalism and after my high school enrolled in a university. To be honest,
even though
I took admission in a top-notch college, I was not satisfied with the quality of knowledge gained as they focused more on theoretical subjects
instead
of
practical
experience.

Landing yourself a job is the best feeling as you
start
earning and become independent.
Moreover
, as far as
learnings
are concerned
, I am sure you would not regret taking a job. The exposure and experience one
gets
while working is incomparable.
Besides
that, interacting with professionals is the best way to enhance your
skills
.

Considering your
skill
-set, I would recommend you to try your luck in the publications. The profiles offered there are enticing, even if not
highly
paid. Apart from that, news channels are a
good
choice to
start
with if money is your motive. Last
but
not the least, there is
a
opening in my organization,
i’ll
share the description, if you
like forward
me your resume.

In case you have any doubt, feel free to contact me.

Your friend,

Ira
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IELTS essay Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill.

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