Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on practical skills. 2kwX
In today's cut throat competition I think educational institution are preparing students appropriately for every challenge. I totally disagree with notion that our institution put immense focus on theoretical education rather than providing practical studies. A number of arguments surround my opinion. Firstly in my opinion theoretical education is the knowledge all compiled facts generation after generation which have immense role in providing kids factual knowledge, Subsequently setting a base for professional education. For example if a student doesn't have an idea about a software coding how he can furnish it into a program. Therefore, factual knowledge is essential before kids are exponentially inclined towards practical knowledge. Secondly I think, Kids now days are already burden a lot by their education on the top of it if there is additional focus put on practical education they might put them under lot of pressure and stress consequently leading to Anxiety, Depression and Feeling Forced, For example if students are reading about how clock works its a adequate learning on the other hand if we give them a project to make a watch themselves it could be a overextension in the most of scenarios. To conclude that I think till high school kids should focus more on theory, When they enter college can focus more on application side of theory, It will make them ready for how to apply this in day to day work life.
In
today
's
cut throat
competition I
think
educational institution are preparing students
appropriately
for every challenge. I
totally
disagree with notion that our institution put immense
focus
on theoretical
education
rather
than providing practical studies. A number of arguments surround my opinion.

Firstly
in my opinion theoretical
education
is the knowledge all compiled facts generation after generation which have immense role in providing
kids
factual knowledge,
Subsequently
setting a base for professional
education
.
For example
if a student doesn't have an
idea
about a software coding how he can furnish it into a program.
Therefore
, factual knowledge is essential
before
kids
are
exponentially
inclined towards practical knowledge.

Secondly
I
think
,
Kids
now
days are already burden a lot by their
education
on the top of it if there is additional
focus
put on practical
education
they might put them under lot of pressure and
stress
consequently
leading to Anxiety, Depression and Feeling Forced,
For example
if students are reading about how clock works
its
a
adequate learning
on the other hand
if we give them a project to
make
a
watch
themselves it could be
a
overextension in the
most of scenarios
.

To conclude
that I
think
till high school
kids
should
focus
more on theory, When they enter college can
focus
more on application side of theory, It will
make
them ready for how to apply this in day to day work life.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on practical skills.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
234 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts