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Some people say that exams are a fair way of testing students. Others say that other forms of testing and evaluation are much better. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

Some people say that exams are a fair way of testing students. Others say that other forms of testing and evaluation are much better. 0EDk3
Evaluation of student’s intelligent power is essential to determine their future goals. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that testing with the help of examination is a correct methodology while other emphasized that it can be done by few other alternative pathways. Trail paragraphs of this essay will describe both perception, I have more inclination towards later arguments. Apparently, various factors make a section of people advocate that our paper-setting exam have sufficient potentials to calculate students eligibilities and have many reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost it is far more simplest then any other types because it required minimum men-work as well as cost to conduct exam also minimum so, it is becomes uncomplicated for examiners too. Moreover, this method can cover maximum number of aspirants from various location at one time. To quote an example, any one board exam-centre having thousands of students whose having same question papers will not only required few supervisiors but it also cut down the its cost. On the other hand, some believe that there should be different forms of testing are required for myriad reasons. Chiefly, the base of conventional testing is count only level of memorization power and eliminate particle approach of education. Furthermore, the level of grasping power and mug-up the things is very subjective so, other method: - Praticles, Viva, Project-work, Team-work, Presentations should be taken as a consideration while marking the student level of capabilities. For instance, if scholar suffering from any learning disorder will be judge by traditional way of examination is quiet un-fair to his carrier, in this situation his other qualities and skill should be graded by different mode of examination. To conclude, giving marks to students either done by exam or special evaluation techniques as per the type and level of learner. Nevertheless, in my opinion alternatives pathways having more justifyable approach towards carrier of them.
Evaluation of
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student’s
intelligent power is essential to determine their future goals.
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, there are
predominantly
two contrasting views where a section of society
vehemently
deems that testing with the
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help
of examination is a correct methodology while
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other
emphasized that it can
be done
by few
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other
alternative pathways. Trail paragraphs of this essay will
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describe
both perception, I have more inclination towards later arguments.

Apparently
, various factors
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make
a section of
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people
advocate that our paper-setting exam have sufficient potentials to calculate
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students
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eligibilities
and have
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many
reasons to substantiate it.
First
and foremost it is far
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more simplest
then any
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other
types
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because
it required minimum
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men
-work
as well
as cost to conduct exam
also
minimum
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so
, it is becomes uncomplicated for examiners too.
Moreover
, this method can cover maximum number of aspirants from various location at one time. To quote an example,
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any one
board
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exam-centre
having thousands of
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students
whose having same question papers will not
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only
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required
few
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supervisiors
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but
it
also
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cut
down
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the its cost
.

On the
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other
hand,
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some
believe that there should be
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different
forms of testing
are required
for myriad reasons.
Chiefly
, the base of conventional testing is count
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only
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level
of memorization power and eliminate particle approach of education.
Furthermore
, the
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level
of grasping power and mug-up the things is
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very
subjective
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so
,
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other
method:
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-
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Praticles
, Viva, Project-work, Team-work, Presentations should
be taken
as a consideration while marking the
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student
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level
of capabilities.
For instance
, if scholar suffering from any learning disorder will be
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judge
by traditional way of examination is quiet un-
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fair
to his carrier, in this situation his
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other
qualities and
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skill
should
be graded
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
mode of examination.

To conclude
, giving marks to
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students
either done by exam or special evaluation techniques as per the type and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
level
of learner.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion alternatives pathways having more
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justifyable
approach towards carrier of them.
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IELTS essay Some people say that exams are a fair way of testing students. Others say that other forms of testing and evaluation are much better.

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